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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 8
Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Originally posted by Moonchild
Let me not post my songs anymore.  |
I'm sorry. 
The song is good! That's just what came to mind when I read that line!
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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Originally posted by Moonchild
 MasqueradeA lullaby plays, our cries pierce the air
Cooing, chatting, celebration, affair
The ball begins and our masks are donned
So starts the dance, its events foregone
Masks for sorrow, masks for pain, masks to hide every shame
No tears, no fears, no strife, no life, no emotion again
A mask for the family, a mask for the friends
Number after number, all laughter and pretense
Music, movement, indulgence, sin
No thoughts, no goals, booze and syringe
Death, escape, as long as you blend
A dancer in green, cut in his prime
A dancer in red, victim of time
A dancer in brown, taken by black
A dancer in white, the final act
A requiem for a dream, silence and a veil
A last dance and a drink for a meaningless tale |
This is just amazing! I'm truly impressed 
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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Originally posted by conatus
I could show you incredible things!
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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I wanna post more of my songs I've written but don't incase I get through and can use them
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
Posts: 23,393
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Originally posted by Obsession
Thanks, that means a lot coming from you tbh  |
Awww really? Why especially from me? It really moved me. It's solidly written, has a lot of emotion and just feels so personal.
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Originally posted by JakeKills
Based on Skill's comment, I'm most interested in reading:
Young Heart
Chains
Devil Come With Me
Kingdom Lights
Origin
Desperate Housewife
Sleep
And whichever had the "can't drink to forget / so I smoke my regret" line
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Here's Sleep 
Sleep
Sleep
This right here is the moment that I dread
The moment that I hate
When the night is so dead
My thoughts overtake
Spiral deeper into bed
As I speculate and exaggerate
Life and it's events
Or lack of.
Mo' money mo' problems
It's a fad.
No money more problems
It's sad.
Lack of.
Lack of love
Lack of money
Lack of sleep.
I need to sleep
A deep sleep
That sleeping beauty type of sleep
That Snow White poison apple type of sleep
A sleep so deep that's it's hard for the thoughts to creep
The deepest sleep that wouldn't make me leap
The moment my Charming comes and kisses me on the cheek.
These thoughts just won't go away
Why do they stay?
Fuck off, if you may?
Wide awake, here I lay
Tossing
Turning
The bed squeaks as I sway
It's ridiculous
Frustrating
Infuriating
I feel the tears falling down my ears
And I think back over the years…
…Oh shit, not this again
Running around in circles
The clock tick tocks
Fuck.
I'm sick of this shit.
Just close your eyes.
Don't think.
Just be.
Fall asleep.
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Why does the mystery judge start every critique with the same line?
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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Screaming at
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So happy with all of my reviews being positive Some tips to work on but everyone liked the song so I'm happy
Oasis (Interlude)
Walking through the desert completely alone
in the valley of love that I call my own
The shadows of pain appear in my sight
The heat from above is ever so bright
The light turns to night within my own mind
The ease of the heat from inside my chest
How the rain in the desert can change over time
In a lake of despair we find our own kind
The journey to love will always be sought
From those in the dark that need to be taught
That the sand in the desert can never be seen
But can only be felt by those in the heat
Finding you couldn’t have cured this drought
Any quicker than a flood in the desert without
The peace from within seeing you in my sight
The sun finally setting and leaving us for tonight
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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Originally posted by GotSkill
Why does the mystery judge start every critique with the same line?
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Maybe it's ATRL-o-matic 
Quote:
Originally posted by Truffle.
Screaming at
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Member Since: 2/26/2012
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I think the secret judge is a mod, Kworb or Vato
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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What time are the rihsults coming at again?
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I think it was like some time around midnight for uk so like who knows really
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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The reviews started coming around 1/2am UK time so maybe it'll be around then?
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Originally posted by Buyonce1814
The reviews started coming around 1/2am UK time so maybe it'll be around then?
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Although I love Sam being the host, I wish there would eventually be one season, when everything is in my timezone
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Member Since: 2/15/2010
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Quote:
Originally posted by Moonchild
Masquerade
A lullaby plays, our cries pierce the air
Cooing, chatting, celebration, affair
The ball begins and our masks are donned
So starts the dance, its events foregone
Masks for sorrow, masks for pain, masks to hide every shame
No tears, no fears, no strife, no life, no emotion again
A mask for the family, a mask for the friends
Number after number, all laughter and pretense
Music, movement, indulgence, sin
No thoughts, no goals, booze and syringe
Death, escape, as long as you blend
A dancer in green, cut in his prime
A dancer in red, victim of time
A dancer in brown, taken by black
A dancer in white, the final act
A requiem for a dream, silence and a veil
A last dance and a drink for a meaningless tale |
What does this all even mean sis
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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Originally posted by BlueM
Although I love Sam being the host, I wish there would eventually be one season, when everything is in my timezone
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 . I kind of think it's a good thing not having to wait minute by minute as results are being revealed because that can be so excruciating  . I get so nervous.
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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The first two judges were indifferent to my song and the last three liked/loved it
Trying to figure out my odds.
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
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Originally posted by Buyonce1814
. I kind of think it's a good thing not having to wait minute by minute as results are being revealed because that can be so excruciating . I get so nervous. |
Yeah, you're right. But like in the morning, you can't really react to them properly anymore, as it was announced long ago
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Member Since: 8/6/2015
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So they all liked my entry except Gotskill. Well.  that's good 
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