[Aurora]

I can't write anymore. Those that can't, teach.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by lovesong

dd thanks it was just a quick draft I tried. I'm practicing to get back into the rhythm of writing songs. I just had horrific flashbacks of checking my meter and counting syllables

I see your a bit rusty then
I'll have you oiled up real smooth

[Lukey]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

Cologne slays hard. And true but Sober is overrated a tad

Why do you set yourself up to then fail?

Originally posted by Sam 

Luke I just remembered you stan for Ciara's "Only One" too, which was also written by Chloe. Come be a stan with me.

My most listened to track ever!

Also my most listened to track in a week ever with over 700 plays in 7 days

[minho]

Originally posted by Sam 

I can't write anymore. Those that can't, teach.

Right? like i'm drained creatively, and I can't quite get inspired just yet /artiste

[MattyTacos]

I see your a bit rusty then
I'll have you oiled up real smooth
See you met my right hand, real trusty yeah
He'll get the job done for you

THIS SEX JAM

[minho]

I'm not sure if we covered this earlier, but what is everyone's favourite song they've ever written? Or, if you're new to songwriting, what are your favourite one-liners?

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by lovesong

I'm not sure if we covered this earlier, but what is everyone's favourite song they've ever written? Or, if you're new to songwriting, what are your favourite one-liners?

I have a few favorites: Scarlet Bitch from PH6, Subway Boy (original, demo), Life Without You (original, demo)

[Temporal]

Originally posted by lovesong

I'm not sure if we covered this earlier, but what is everyone's favourite song they've ever written? Or, if you're new to songwriting, what are your favourite one-liners?

Odyssey, Dance With the Ghost and Ocean Lips. And of course my intro

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

It's an amazing marketing technique if done correctly, word of mouth is really effective I wish this happened more often in the west

They marketed this one in a similar way:

Not that main character basically being Madoka, what anime is this?

[Jackson]

What's going on in here?

Way too many posts to keep track of. Lemme just search my name

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Odyssey, Dance With the Ghost and Ocean Lips. And of course my intro

Dancing With the Gods is an all time fave

[UFO]

Originally posted by lovesong

I'm not sure if we covered this earlier, but what is everyone's favourite song they've ever written? Or, if you're new to songwriting, what are your favourite one-liners?

Evangeline

Staring into the abyss
The clouds so grey, I wish
There were no limits to life
Just a matter of time
'Til we recognise demise
Fading into the skies
But was I really worth it?
Treating me like your puppet
Did I ever deserve this?
Sucked dry, I'm so exhausted

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

Full of despair, the cold air
Whispering in my ear
Oh, I knew it was coming
But never thought so soon
And I didn't think this through
When I kept loving you
Sometimes I wanna decide
How I should say goodbye
Instead of it torn away
I wanna live in vain

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

I wrote it just before last season

[Lukey]

Originally posted by lovesong

I'm not sure if we covered this earlier, but what is everyone's favourite song they've ever written? Or, if you're new to songwriting, what are your favourite one-liners?

Umm... I'm not sure but personally! Not in PH, it would be a very basic song that I wrote when I first started writing songs. Very very basic but I love it and it'll always have a place in my heart.


https://soundcloud.com/cp1234/01-the-truth

[Temporal]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

Dancing With the Gods is an all time fave

Yet you get the title wrong

[UFO]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

Not that main character basically being Madoka, what anime is this?

It's called Gakkou Gurashi! The pink-haired girl is ****ED UP.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Evangeline

Staring into the abyss
The clouds so grey, I wish
There were no limits to life
Just a matter of time
'Til we recognise demise
Fading into the skies
But was I really worth it?
Treating me like your puppet
Did I ever deserve this?
Sucked dry, I'm so exhausted

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

Full of despair, the cold air
Whispering in my ear
Oh, I knew it was coming
But never thought so soon
And I didn't think this through
When I kept loving you
Sometimes I wanna decide
How I should say goodbye
Instead of it torn away
I wanna live in vain

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

I wrote it just before last season

THIS MASTERPIECE GIRL

Reminds me of this song:



You should listen it's a masterpiece

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Yet you get the title wrong

Girl... I was PRAISING it Like ReviSLAY? This is What Makes Us Gods? ARTFLOP?

[minho]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Evangeline

Staring into the abyss
The clouds so grey, I wish
There were no limits to life
Just a matter of time
'Til we recognise demise
Fading into the skies
But was I really worth it?
Treating me like your puppet
Did I ever deserve this?
Sucked dry, I'm so exhausted

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

Full of despair, the cold air
Whispering in my ear
Oh, I knew it was coming
But never thought so soon
And I didn't think this through
When I kept loving you
Sometimes I wanna decide
How I should say goodbye
Instead of it torn away
I wanna live in vain

Evangeline, you promised me
Happy memories for eternity
Evangeline, you left the scene
When I needed you most, Evangeline
Our time is up, ashes to dust
Evangeline, you just gave up on me
It's not the same without you here
Evangeline

I wrote it just before last season

Ooh I like this a lot, the imagery is great.

Originally posted by JustLuke

Umm... I'm not sure personally! Not in PH, it would be a very basic song that I wrote when I first started writing songs. Very very basic but I love it and it'll always have a place in my heart.


https://soundcloud.com/cp1234/01-the-truth

It's really cute! Did you play the guitar?

Originally posted by MattyTacos

THIS MASTERPIECE GIRL

Reminds me of this song:



You should listen it's a masterpiece

YES I love this song & Annie.

[minho]

ok no more multi-quoting

[Hugamari]

Okay I wrote this pretty quickly (most of the time was spent looking for a synonym for "similarly" but I just ended up using that. ) and I think this will be the "interlude" to the My Kingdom Come intro.

Fireflies

I used to believe
It was only me
Who’d wander ‘round
So aimlessly

No certain course
Or sense of worth
No sight or sound
No identity

Then I realized
Like fireflies
We roam about
Similarly

So let us shine
The spark of life
Until we’ve found
Our destinies

I’d used to dream
It was only me
I’d wander ‘round
So aimlessly

No beaten path
No one who’d ask
If I’m alright
What’s haunting me

Then came the time
I found the light
It was inside
Inside of me

My firefly
No longer cries
I set it free
I let it be

So let us shine
Like fireflies...

I'm trying to work on adding more imagery to my songs, and I think this does a decent job at it. Obviously I could expand on it, but this particular song I think is fine as is.