[URBAN]

I did an intro, but I think I'm going to do an interlude as well since I have a lot of time till the deadline.

[Achilles.]

I think I just wrote an interlude but it feels weird and incomplete because there's no chorus.

And it might be a bit long.
The meter is pretty good, though, I think.

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by conatus

I hate just writing "(Chorus)" and anyone who just puts "(Chorus)" is dead to me.

SaME

[Temporal]

Is anybody able to look over my intro?

[conatus]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Is anybody able to look over my intro?

No. (Yes.)

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Is anybody able to look over my intro?

I will get back to it eventually sorry

[URBAN]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Is anybody able to look over my intro?

I'll look at yours if you look at mine.

[Era]

Me

[Vulnicura]

My inbox is open if anyone wants feedback.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Wait, did Confident leak??

No, there's 90 second previews of every song on iTunes.

[KeshasFansRose]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

My inbox is open if anyone wants feedback.

I'm scared. But lemme just rework a line

[conatus]

Originally posted by conatus

Yeah, I need someone to read this. I tried writing an R&B interlude so like... Yeah.

Nn, OK. Hate you all.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Sam 

When you get 522'd because of a friend request.

That just happened to me right now and I couldn't use the forum for an hour

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by conatus

Nn, OK. Hate you all.

I'll read it if you want sis

[conatus]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

I'll read it if you want sis

You don't understand my art!

OK, one sec.

[MattyTacos]

As for Confident, the song snippets I heard are good but it sounds TOO much like Demi-lite.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by conatus

You don't understand my art!

OK, one sec.

Still mad over Get To Hell I see

[Temporal]

Originally posted by conatus

No. (Yes.)

Okay. (**** you.)

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I will get back to it eventually sorry

Don't worry about it, I know you're still nursing your hangover

Originally posted by Urban_Fan

I'll look at yours if you look at mine.

Sure

Originally posted by Vulnicura

My inbox is open if anyone wants feedback.

Well

Originally posted by GotSkill

No, there's 90 second previews of every song on iTunes.

Oh, **** that.

[MattyTacos]

If you feel like you're the spark
Then come out of the dark

Btw, the Outta My Hands (Loco) hate can get outta here

It's outta my haaaaands
And into your arms agaaaain

[Jaxswim]

If someone wants to send me their entry I'd be happy to comment, I want to help but I also want to see the kind of thing others are writing