[Temporal]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Gutted to see Luke go . Sad for inuborg too . Well done guys for making it this far





The last one was ClarksonSlays. Obviously you're all ****ing amazing though. I mean you beat out like 60 other people for starters but even the stuff I've read over the last couple months has been top notch.

Slay me, I didn't even see the hints.

[Tymps.]

All my picks for Holy Trinity judges accepted the offer, I have all of the challenge ideas ready and people have said they want to play. I'm so excited, inb4 it gets triple the amount of replies this game has!

[minho]

Okay now that I'm on my laptop I can read the challenge more closely. Screaming at the Me. I Am Mariah... painting

I guess the challenge makes sense but I feel a little bit unsure. So is it an autobiographical song where we write about our lives (as in us in real life) or do we just write a song that would be interpreted as autobiographical (i.e first person perspective etc.). And about the themes involved too, is it like if a person had a bad breakup they could write about it and it would work because its about them or is it more that we should focus on how we grew up and who we are as a person etc.?

I feel like I am going to struggle with this challenge since I find it hard to write about myself personally, I prefer to assume characters and write stories with my songs. The one time I did a personal song (Regret) it was dragged.

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Slay me, I didn't even see the hints.

Keep the good work up!

[Jackson]

OK guys, I finally uploaded my song from earlier this season "Liar" although I rewrote the verses. Plz listen and hold in all your draggings so I don't cry


https://soundcloud.com/jack-reid-30/liar

[Temporal]

Originally posted by lovesong

Okay now that I'm on my laptop I can read the challenge more closely. Screaming at the Me. I Am Mariah... painting

I guess the challenge makes sense but I feel a little bit unsure. So is it an autobiographical song where we write about our lives (as in us in real life) or do we just write a song that would be interpreted as autobiographical (i.e first person perspective etc.). And about the themes involved too, is it like if a person had a bad breakup they could write about it and it would work because its about them or is it more that we should focus on how we grew up and who we are as a person etc.?

I feel like I am going to struggle with this challenge since I find it hard to write about myself personally, I prefer to assume characters and write stories with my songs. The one time I did a personal song (Regret) it was dragged.

Yeah I feel like I'm gonna struggle with challenge at first glance.

[Tymps.]

https://plug.dj/plathit

password is analspears

[inuborg]

Originally posted by conatus

http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...4#post28446044

👀

What blasphemous soul reported that. Fiona is a god and haters will seethe

[DevonDreams]

what are y'alls thoughts on this song?

The first time I saw you, you looked so perfect standing there.
I'm so glad I found you. I love being around you
We grew as best friends because you always understand.
You're the only one who gets me and really sees me for who I am.

I know we're done and im so sorry. I know I hurt you.
I know you're needing your space, but I'll be here patiently waiting.
I'm not one to walk away so easily
If you asked me how I'm doing I would say I'm doing just fine.
No matter how badly I want you to be mine.

I really need you in my life.
No matter what I have to do I will wait for you
There's no gaurntee that this relationship will be easy.
There's only one way to say it... I love you

[minho]

Originally posted by Tymps.

https://plug.dj/plathit

password is analspears

I'll join later tonight if people are still around

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by lovesong

I'll join later tonight if people are still around

Well we're still there now, but only four of us. Come thru guise

[minho]

Originally posted by inuborg

What blasphemous soul reported that. Fiona is a god and haters will seethe

This truth 👀

The Idler Wheel... and Extraordinary Machine >>

Originally posted by DevonRoars

what are y'alls thoughts on this song?

I really like the concept, and I like how you build it up to the point of "I love you"

It's a little repetitive though, I think if you used a bit more complex language at times it would enhance the lyrics... but it's a nice idea so far!

[inuborg]

Originally posted by lovesong

This truth 👀

The Idler Wheel... and Extraordinary Machine >>



I really like the concept, and I like how you build it up to the point of "I love you"

It's a little repetitive though, I think if you used a bit more complex language at times it would enhance the lyrics... but it's a nice idea so far!

When The Pawn is her best tbh

[minho]

Originally posted by inuborg

When The Pawn is her best tbh

I like all of her albums now but EM was the one that I first heard and The Idler Wheel is just one of my favourite albums of all time.

[Aurora]

Someone is a mess for reporting that, wonder who it could be. 🍐

[Era]

OK this is the first time I'm doing this

Week 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8.

Song Under Our Tree Someone Like You I'll Keep Waiting Perfect Storm Ferris Wheel Garden Full of Roses Red Lights Silver Lining

Genre Country Pop Pop Pop Synth Pop Dance Pop Dream Pop Pop Country Pop

Peak #14 #28 #11 #9 #2 #9 #10 #1

My song if anyone wants to read:

Silver Lining

[Verse 1]
Walking through the rain with the traffic on a high
My blue dress all wet and a book covered my head
I saw you giving out flyers for a work place nearby
Wandering towards you but ended up stumbling instead
Helped me back up, swept me away with your sweet smile
Walked me home and asked “can I see you tonight?”

[Pre-chorus]
I said meet me at the bus stop
When the rain simmers down
Through the flickering city lights
We’ll take the bus downtown

[Chorus]
You grabbed my hand and we went chasing the stars
Higher than the skyscrapers, faster than the cars
Countless voices in the crowd but I only heard yours
A million bright lights but not one brighter than ours
I put on my dreamy crown and you wore your armor shining
I was the queen of the clouds and you were my silver lining

[Verse 2]
In our big city small world we woke up every street
Put my hand on your shoulder as you pulled me closer
Dancing around the fountains to our racing heartbeat
I wish the night never ended, wish I stayed longer

[Pre-chorus]
I said meet me at the station
When the sun comes back around
Through the smoke clouds
I’ll take the train back to town

[Chorus]
You grabbed my hand and we went chasing the stars
Higher than the skyscrapers, faster than the cars
Countless voices in the crowd but I only heard yours
A million bright lights but not one brighter than ours
I put on my dreamy crown and you wore your armor shining
I was the queen of the clouds and you were my silver lining

[Bridge]
You stood there with a letter in your hand
I whispered while I walked towards you
Please stop me while you can
Why don’t you understand?
You smiled as I started moving away
I could see it in your eyes
What I wanted you to say
Kept looking at you until you faded away

[Chorus]
You grabbed my hand and we went chasing the stars
Higher than the skyscrapers, faster than the cars
Countless voices in the crowd but I only heard yours
A million bright lights but not one brighter than ours
I put on my dreamy crown and you wore your armor shining
I was the queen of the clouds and you were my silver lining
You were my silver lining

[Outro]
You wrote I didn’t want to hold you back
I’ll never forget you and I hope you won’t forget me
I’ll always be your silver lining
On every cloud you’ll find me

[Era]

The new challenge tho

I hate writing about myself Never tried either

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Era

The new challenge tho

I hate writing about myself Never tried either

Well we don't know you, so

[MattyTacos]

This week's idea is flawless

[MattyTacos]

nnn not someone getting reported. real cute. bye