Wow thank you all for your reviews so far! You all made some really great points and I'll definitely keep them in mind for the future.
The only thing I just might clarify was that I understand the intro was a bit fast-paced and could've used some buildup but I was writing as if this song could be a track on the album so I figured that the rest of the tracks from the album would have supplied that momentum that the "legs go up" lines would make sense.
But that's fine, I totally get what you mean and I'm glad to see everyone liked it!
Can't wait for the rest.
