[Truth Teller]

Yaaaaaaasss at 2 early entries

[Hugamari]

@ my PM to TT (and will most likely be forwarded to the other judges), the message I prefaced my entry with was NOT me quitting. I've just been a bit worried about my situation lately and I want to put some perspective on things if I end up a bit late for a future challenge (or maybe end up not submitting.) I think that was evident in the message, but I just wanted to be sure.

[inuborg]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Yaaaaaaasss at 2 early entries

Now 3 lol unless mine was already part of the 2

[minho]

Wow you guys are fast!

I haven't even been able to come up with a concept yet. I've had some ideas but nothing's clicked. Whichever I do, there will definitely be a Beyoncé-rap intro.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Hugamari

@ my PM to TT (and will most likely be forwarded to the other judges), the message I prefaced my entry with was NOT me quitting. I've just been a bit worried about my situation lately and I want to put some perspective on things if I end up a bit late for a future challenge (or maybe end up not submitting.) I think that was evident in the message, but I just wanted to be sure.

I hardly ever post the personal messages to the judges, unless they're related to the song itself. If you want me to forward yours along with your song, I can do that though

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by lovesong

Wow you guys are fast!

I haven't even been able to come up with a concept yet. I've had some ideas but nothing's clicked. Whichever I do, there will definitely be a Beyoncé-rap intro.

Here for this

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

I hardly ever post the personal messages to the judges, unless they're related to the song itself. If you want me to forward yours along with your song, I can do that though

It's not really a big issue, just as long as you guys know I gave a heads up before I disappeared (if I do, that is. I'm not sure if I will yet.)

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Hugamari

It's not really a big issue, just as long as you guys know I gave a heads up before I disappeared (if I do, that is. I'm not sure if I will yet.)

I'll forward it then! Although I hope that whatever issue there is, you manage to overcome it and keep playing

[keshaspearsxo]

Ryn weaver album

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Ryn weaver album

Wait... it came out? I might check it out I guess

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Wait... it came out? I might check it out I guess

It's streaming on iTunes so their are rips online. It's great

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Adam has a challenge where you write a verse+chorus solely from quotes from a joint Jaden and Willow interview (he linked it somewhere), and whichever he likes best will have +.5 added to Adam's judgements

And it's supposed to be funny! I'd feel so bad if someone spent time trying to make a serious song from Jaden Smith.

[inuborg]

Originally posted by lovesong

Wow you guys are fast!

I haven't even been able to come up with a concept yet. I've had some ideas but nothing's clicked. Whichever I do, there will definitely be a Beyoncé-rap intro.

When it comes to writing a song, for me its impossible to not think about it while its incomplete. Like when I go to bed and close my eyes I'm still thinking about possible lines and stuff, its crazy lol.

Also once I have a concept, I never abandon it, I just work at it until I like the result, so I never start over.

[Hugamari]

Oh, and since I wrote *2* songs, this is my song that got sent for remixes to chart on the BB dance/club play charts~!

One Time Deal

[Verse]
I know you know
The same song and dance is old
We exchange names
But we’ll forget after today

And we don’t care
Cause love isn’t in the air
So all I need’s
For you to take this stress off me

[Hook]
No kissin’ in the moonlight
Or romance on the shoreline
We’ll just get right down to work
Then we leave, and no one gets hurt

[Chorus]
There’s no sense putting on a show
We’ll just stop when the credits roll
We can drop the masquerade
And head straight for the third base

There’s no use in pretendin’
We both know how it’s endin’
We may as well keep things real
You and I are a one time deal

[Verse 2]
Now we both know
The way the game mostly goes
So let’s not play
Cause we know that it isn’t fate

This isn’t love
And we know what we both want
So all I need’s
For you to take this dress off me

[Hook]
No kissin’ in the moonlight
Or romance on the shoreline
We’ll just get right down to work
Then we leave, and no one gets hurt

[Chorus]
There’s no sense putting on a show
We’ll just stop when the credits roll
We can drop the masquerade
And head straight for the third base

There’s no use in pretendin’
We both know how it’s endin’
We may as well keep things real
You and I are a one time deal

[Bridge]
We’re touring each-other
Without the attractions
Explore one another
To see what’ll happen

Let’s keep things simple
No puzzles, no riddles
I’m not looking for love for life
I’m looking to get off tonight

[Chorus]
There’s no sense putting on a show
We’ll just stop when the credits roll
We can drop the masquerade
And head straight for the third base

There’s no use in pretendin’
We both know how it’s endin’
We may as well keep things real
You and I are a one time deal

There’s no sense putting on a show
We’ll just stop when the credits roll
We can drop the masquerade
And head straight for the third base

There’s no use in pretendin’
We both know how it’s endin’
We may as well keep things real
You and I are a one time deal

[Truth Teller]

I like it

I also liked the other non-submitted track you made a lyric video for

NOT you having a more solid unreleased catalogue than my fave

[Hugamari]

YUes @ me serving Cassie/Kesha/Lana unreleased

[keshaspearsxo]

I wish I could post my stuff.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I wish I could post my stuff.

are you one of those atrl GAYS who's like "I don't want to post my songs, Britney Spears is lurking and she'll steal my lyrics"

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Tymps.

are you one of those atrl GAYS who's like "I don't want to post my songs, Britney Spears is lurking and she'll steal my lyrics"

Welp no I would be flattered if someone stole my lyrics. It just makes me feel very anxious and embarassed

[minho]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Here for this

Well I haven't totally written it, but what I have so far is very... sexual.

I'm thinking of having like a rapped intro (a la Yoncé/Partition) but reversing it so the intro is sexual, the actual song is about deceit/lies, and then the bridge goes back to sex.

We'll see