"It wasn't bad, but you can do better."
I literally can't though.
I wasn't born with the natural born ability to write a deep, thought-provoking story with flawless meter and stress, brilliant word play and rhyme choices, with a message that hasn't been explored before, all in less than a week.
This week was the hardest I tried on a song and I really thought I did well, but if I have ever done better I'd love to know. Like idk maybe "To You..." was better, but I didn't have to tell a story with that song.
