You know I truly appreciate you as a member on ATRL, despite the fact you can be rather bratty and annoying. But a bitch gotta stay honest.
Your song is all over the place. All over the place as in Euphy during one of her meltdowns in the Platinum Hit thread. It's vague. Obscure. It doesn't flow. Some of the sentences don't make sense at all. I feel like you were too inspired by the Norwegian entry during this year's Eurovision. I feel like you also tried to implement aspects from Rihanna & Eminem's collaboration. No, it's not because of the word Monster at all. I just get that impression from your song.
When I read your song, I get this vibe of uncertainty. I am legitimately skeptical about your abilities as a songwriter. This song especially just does not read 'Jorge'. They read 'Jorge-trying-to-be-a-pretentious-song-writer' with all these ideas and concepts and themes that just completely fall flat.
We're at the live shows now. We've gone from 67 contestants to 15. Getting rather creepily fast to the finals and you're the only song-writer without an identity. I urge you to find your own voice and start writing from the bottom of your heart. I hope you can prove me wrong and write a song that will have me say 'Oh yes. This truly resembles Jorge as a person. He absolutely nailed it'. Because with this challenge, although that was the assignment, you did not give me that at all.
You know I truly appreciate you as a member on ATRL, despite the fact you can be rather bratty and annoying. But a bitch gotta stay honest.
Your song is all over the place. All over the place as in Euphy during one of her meltdowns in the Platinum Hit thread. It's vague. Obscure. It doesn't flow. Some of the sentences don't make sense at all. I feel like you were too inspired by the Norwegian entry during this year's Eurovision. I feel like you also tried to implement aspects from Rihanna & Eminem's collaboration. No, it's not because of the word Monster at all. I just get that impression from your song.
When I read your song, I get this vibe of uncertainty. I am legitimately skeptical about your abilities as a songwriter. This song especially just does not read 'Jorge'. They read 'Jorge-trying-to-be-a-pretentious-song-writer' with all these ideas and concepts and themes that just completely fall flat.
We're at the live shows now. We've gone from 67 contestants to 15. Getting rather creepily fast to the finals and you're the only song-writer without an identity. I urge you to find your own voice and start writing from the bottom of your heart. I hope you can prove me wrong and write a song that will have me say 'Oh yes. This truly resembles Jorge as a person. He absolutely nailed it'. Because with this challenge, although that was the assignment, you did not give me that at all.
Bitch wtf? I don't even know The Monster lyrics.
And if the songs that come from the bottom of my heart are trash, I gotta write something better.
