Ferris Wheel - The first verse is so good, it immediately captured my attention and drew me into the song. The lyrics, were simple, yet effective and memorizing. The pre-chorus is a nice build-up, doesn’t go in hard, but it’s cute. I love the chorus though, very calming and sweet. The second verse is just as great as the first, but probably didn’t have the same punch. And your bridge, so beautiful. This is your best song and one of my favorites.
Thank you SO much I really really appreciate all your feedback and I'm glad you loved almost everything about my song
Fυckboys (Eros) : You know what
OK, clearly this song is not meant to be a lyrical masterpiece or a serious magnum opus, but for what it is, you ****ing nailed it
I could totally see myself hearing this on the radio or on the club and helplessly singing along with conviction and passion that caucasians are hardly ever able to pull off. Jhenashe asked for a hard hitting r&b record and that's it. This is lead single material for her. ****ing anthem! It reminds me of your first entry, which sadly I was the only one to like, but it gave me life and so did this one. My only concern is that the first half of the first verse has some really long lines, which may not work meter wise. Other than that, congrats
I really really appreciate all your feedback and I'm glad you loved almost everything about my song 
so beautiful. I had so many options this week! Libras hate having too many options!
