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ΤΗΕ ΒRIDGE 
The Oprah line
I want to record this with tons of adlibs and a cute 3LW-esque production 
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Originally posted by Truth Teller
ΤΗΕ ΒRIDGE
The Oprah line
I want to record this with tons of adlibs and a cute 3LW-esque production |
I'm screaming in bed going through all these songs  . What's hilarious is I used to think I was so good and now I'm just cringing 
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Get ready
"INNOCENCE NEVER FELT SO GUILTY"
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Can someone who really knows their **** about meter tell me if my song is solid or not?  GotSkill looked it over and didn't point it out so that must be a sign 
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Originally posted by GotSkill
Get ready
"INNOCENCE NEVER FELT SO GUILTY" |
bad blood teas 
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
Can someone who really knows their **** about meter tell me if my song is solid or not? GotSkill looked it over and didn't point it out so that must be a sign |
I did initially and you fixed it in your second draft so you're good
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I did initially and you fixed it in your second draft so you're good
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Okay good 
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Some old songs of my own:
 Oregon (Stop Calling Me)Once upon a time there was a couple that lived in New York
They had three kids, a dog and a big ****ing house
But one day, they decided to split ways
The wife took the kids, the house and the husband moved all the way
To Oregon
One day, the husband wanted her back
But the wife didn’t think like that
And whenever he’d call and tell her how he felt
This is what, this is what, this is what, this is what she’d say:
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever the case, I’ll want you to go away
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever you’ll say, I’ll still want you to go away
So go away, go away
Whenever he came home he’d be all alone with just him and his cats
There was Felix, Daphne, Randy, Kitty, Sparkles, Eddie, Becky, Becky the 2nd, Becky the 3rd, Becky the 4th, and more after that
The husband wanted to see his kids again
But this is what, this is what, this is what, this is what she’d say:
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever the case, I’ll want you to go away
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever you’ll say, I’ll still want you to go away
So go away, go away
Oregon, yeah Oregon, you have to understand
I used to then, but now I don’t want to hold your hand
And walk through the park
And dance in the dance
So stop calling me
Please
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever the case, I’ll want you to go away
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever you’ll say, I’ll still want you to go away
So go away, go away
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever the case, I’ll want you to go away
Oregon, I want you, want you, want you to stop calling me
Whatever you’ll say, I’ll still want you to go away
So go away, go away
Say Yeah
Let me break it down step by step
You move to the right then you move to the left
Then you slide to the side
Then you turn around, spin twist glide
Nothing wrong with that, resist the urge to tap
Your feet to the beat as you sitting in your seat
You see, you can’t get the melody
Out of your hea-ea-ead, little symphony
So if you wanna wanna start say go
And I’mma try to raise it up little mo’
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
And if you wanna go fast say yes
And I’mma I’mma take away all the stress
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
Your heads bobbing, popping and locking
It down down to the ground, so shocking
And you keep going now, stay on the floo-oor now
And get money money money like a cash cow
Damn, it never ever stops
It just keeps on going around round the clock
And I’m so high I’m flying even though I’m not even trying
You better be complying with the changes I’m design-sign-signing
So if you wanna wanna start say go
And I’mma try to raise it up little mo’
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
And if you wanna go fast say yes
And I’mma I’mma take away all the stress
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
So if you wanna wanna start say go
And I’mma try to raise it up little mo’
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
And if you wanna go fast say yes
And I’mma I’mma take away all the stress
And if you wanna wanna break from the crowd
Say yeah say yeah say yeah say yeah say
Trust Truth and Lies
I never thought of it that way
Didn’t even consider it
But now that you decided to bring it up
Doesn’t it seem a bit strange?
This thought is running circles through my head
I might be obsessed
I thought I was so blessed, I stood so tall
But since you brought it up
I might’ve just been wrong
To think you even ever had my trust at all
Don’t tell me lies, don’t even try
‘Cuz I am onto you
As you pass by, give you the evil eye
‘Cuz now I know the truth
Don’t spin those tall tales, ‘cuz they’re just veils
To cover up your ass
To think I even ever trusted you at all
Now that I think back, it was so obvious
I should’ve realized before
All those times I told you all my secrets
Walking down the shore
This betrayal’s driving me insane
How will I punish you?
Oh, what to do, yeah, what to do?
And you still kept me hanging on
I must have a screw loose
To have you even ever have my trust at all
Don’t tell me lies, don’t even try
‘Cuz I am onto you
As you pass by, give you the evil eye
‘Cuz now I know the truth
Don’t spin those tall tales, ‘cuz they’re just veils
To cover up your ass
To think I even ever trusted you at all
Oopsie-daisy
Did I just accidently whisper that into their ear
Oopsie-daisy
But don’t worry
Since everyone knows, you have nothing to fear
Don’t tell me lies, don’t even try
‘Cuz I am onto you
As you pass by, give you the evil eye
‘Cuz now I know the truth
Don’t spin those tall tales, ‘cuz they’re just veils
To cover up your ass
To think I even ever trusted you at all
Wait, that wasn’t you? Oh, oops…
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Oregon dear god The second stanza
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Oops forgot a gem!
Fight
Here’s the setting: Saturday night
You look beautiful in the moonlight
But you have that look on your face; is everything all right?
You’re like an animal; don’t approach, she might bite
It’s okay baby
If you’re wound up so tight
It’s okay baby
If you’re not such a delight
It’s okay baby
But please, just sit tight
‘Cuz I don’t fight
No more, no more
Scene 2: You think you’re always right
But you’re always that way, isn’t that right?
You think everything’s just black and white
You insist even if I think that it’s it’s not quite
It’s okay baby
If you’re wound up so tight
It’s okay baby
If you’re not such a delight
It’s okay baby
But please, just sit tight
‘Cuz I don’t fight
No more, no more
Your voice: it cuts like a knife (x3)
And I had melodies and chords to all of these, even that weird-ass Oregon one.
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I should post the lyrics I wrote when I was 14 to a song called Hipster Dude but they're so embarassing 
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Whenever he came home he’d be all alone with just him and his cats
There was Felix, Daphne, Randy, Kitty, Sparkles, Eddie, Becky, Becky the 2nd, Becky the 3rd, Becky the 4th, and more after that
I live
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This working title that I have is both hilariously cheesy and surprisingly clever. 
Coming for a "Bated Breath" type thing here, its probably my first ~dark~ song.
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I'm gonna throw in some old songs I wrote too!
Farewell My Love
It’s Friday night, I’m driving home
I’m late from work, you already know
I called you up to tell you so
You said okay, you’re waiting up
I’m at an intersection now
The light says green, so then I go
But that guy from the right’s too drunk to know
He hits my car
He didn’t know
So as I bleed out on this road
There’s just one thing I hope you know
Farewell, my love
You have my heart
I kept my vow
Now death do us part
It’s Saturday, you’re all alone
You shouldn’t be, answer your phone
Let your mother hear you out
Let your father wear you out
Let your friend take you on a ride
Don’t hide everything inside
Baby, I know it’s not okay
But you can cry
Don’t be afraid
As I bleed out on this road
There’s something you have to know
Farewell, my love
I love you so
As my breath stills
I hope you know
Don’t ever stop living your life
It’s not okay but it’ll be fine
Farewell, my love
It hurts us both
Don’t want to leave
Don’t want to go
If I had another chance
I’d do it all over again
It’s not worth it if it’s not you
I don’t regret loving you
As I bleed out on this road
I hear the sirens, it’s so cold
Farewell, my love
I loved you so
And that’s one thing that you should know
Go on and live for both of us
See everything that I just could not
I hope one day
Love finds you again
I hope life is kind
Till we meet again
Farewell, my love
It’s not the end
One door closed
Another opened
Farewell, my love
I love you so
As I bleed out on this road
Rubber Band
I just want to breathe
Give me a chance to let go
To find something inside of me
And then I can let it show
Beyond the clouds, into the sky
No love has ever taken me this high
But it's a long way down to fall.
Your love is like a rubber band
It bends at the touch of another hand
You twisted and turned but now I've learned
And I don't want you coming back, to me.
Your love is like a rubber band
I just want to talk
Will you talk to me?
Or will you go someplace else?
Somewhere you don't have to be
I know that you've been lying in front of my eyes
Might’ve just gotten glasses but I'm still so blind
I can't believe I didn't see the signs
Your love is like a rubber band
It bends at the touch of another hand
You twisted and turned but now I've learned
And I don't want you coming back, to me.
Ooh ooh whoa
And your love is like a rubber band
Ooh ooh whoa
And your love is like a rubber band
You gave your love out to everyone on the street
You took something special and you made it so cheap
I should’ve known better than to give you my heart
Wish I’d seen it then
Seen it from the start
You won't sting me when I let you go.
I took my heart back and you didn't know
Your love is like a rubber band
It bends at the touch of another hand
You twisted and turned but now I've learned
And I don't want you coming back
Your love is like a rubber band
It could burst at any given time
And you twisted and turned
But now I have learned
And I don't want you coming back to sting me.
Because your love is like, your love is like
A rubber band
A rubber band
A rubber band
Your love is like a rubber band
And I don’t want you coming back, to me.
Your love is like a rubber band
Your love is like a rubber band
It bends at the touch of another hand
You twisted and turned but now I've learned
And I don't want you coming back
Your love is like a rubber band
Your love is like a rubber band
Your love is like a rubber band
And I don’t want you coming back to me.
The Best of Me
I can’t believe I let you back into my life
How could I?
I lost my sense of direction
It’s happening once more
I should’ve known you’d never change
A leopard cannot modify its spots
Here we go again
I’ve done it this time
You played with my heart
You ruined my life
Once upon a time, we seemed meant to be
It seems you always win
You got the best of me
I don’t know why I believed in the lie
I guess I’m so alone, and your love feels so right
It’s not really love at all
I should know better by now
But you get me every time
Here we go again
I’ve done it this time
You played with my heart
You ruined my life
Once upon a time, we seemed meant to be
It seems you always win
You got the best of me
I don’t know where we are headed
I can’t even think
There is nothing good inside of you
You keep betraying me
And yet I fall again and again
I keep on falling
I let myself believe in lies
Here we go again
I’ve done it this time
You played with my heart
You ruined my life
Once upon a time, we seemed meant to be
It seems you always win
You got the best of me
I played along with fire
It’s time I got burned
I failed the class before
Now I have to learn
Once upon a time, you made a fool of me
There won’t be a next time
This is the last you get of me
The last you get of me
The last you get of me
My heart might be broken
One day, it will heal
Ooh, ooh
Ooh, ooh
Ooh, ooh
You got the best of me
And this one is about my death phobia. I have a newer edit of it, but meh I'll post the old one.
Nameless
I lie in bed at night
I watch the stars shine bright
I wonder what it must be like to be one
Everybody knows you glow
Everybody loves you so
Everybody’s wishing on your existence
Before I close my eyes,
And I drift off to sleep
I wonder if anyone will know I existed
And just before I close my eyes
I think I start to realize
That I don’t want to live my life nameless
CHORUS:
What if tomorrow I disappeared?
Would anybody know I was even here?
If I don’t leave my mark, how will I ever know?
How will people see my worth if I do not glow?
I cannot live my life, letting time pass by
I cannot live my life, just asking why
I cannot let my life just go unnoticed
I cannot leave this life and still feel nameless.
It keeps me up at night
I cannot dream a dream
I wonder if anyone will know that I was dreaming
It’s not about my pride
But I feel vilified cause everybody thinks I just want to be famous
But I don’t want the cars
I don’t want the stars
I just want to be remembered
CHORUS:
What if tomorrow I disappeared?
Would anybody know I was even here?
If I don’t leave my mark, how will I ever know?
How will people see my worth if I do not glow?
I cannot live my life, letting time pass by
I cannot live my life, just asking why
I cannot let my life just go unnoticed
I cannot leave this life and still feel nameless.
What if I die and nobody remembers my life?
What if in years to come everyone forgets my name?
What if my life has no purpose?
What is my life if it has no purpose?
Why must I die if I serve no purpose?
Why does life have to be so fleeting?
CHORUS:
What if tomorrow I disappeared?
Would anybody know I was even here?
If I don’t leave my mark, how will I ever know?
How will people see my worth if I do not glow?
I cannot live my life, letting time pass by
I cannot live my life, just asking why
I cannot let my life just go unnoticed
I cannot leave this life and still feel nameless.
If I go, won’t the world just keep on spinning?
Will anybody cry if I’m not in it?
And when all of those people go away?
What of my life will still remain?
What is the mark I will leave?
Will anybody carry a piece of me?
Will I ever get the answers to all my questions?
I don’t want to live a non-existence
Can’t let everyone forget my name
Can’t just disappear when the world has changed
I hope that when I die, I won’t be forgotten
Cause what have I really done if I go out nameless?
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I'll have to reply in an hour and a few GS, i'm watching a movie
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Thanks!!! Although I just got to work 
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I'll have to reply in an hour and a few GS, i'm watching a movie
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That's OK I'm busy anyways 
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