[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Sam 

I forgot to post my song from last round in here. Should I?

Let's both do it cause I didn't either. I doubt anyone wants to see mine though but just in case.

[Jezang Looz]

Round 4 - My Yin-Yang polar opposite topic is: Companionship

Broken Wounds

BROKEN WOUNDS
LYRICS

[Verse 1]
Through the bewilder forest
Lies a wicked witch designed for horror
Her fairytales have no happy ending
Instead she preys on innocent explorers
But have no fear all throughout the night
Because I see a light veiled behind the clouds
She never had a single love in her life
So she destroys all those who crawl in her sight

[Pre-Chorus]
Follow me and I’ll show you the way
To fight through her pain and help her love again
We’ll teach her to cease her magic doom
With her vile broom that casts evil voodoo

[Chorus]
We’ll give her a heart
To heal her broken wounds
Before she falls apart and her end is soon
(We’ll give her a heart)
We’ll teach her how to love again
To show her what it means to truly be a friend
(We’ll give her a heart)
We’ll end her unholy spells and her malicious tricks
To fix her broken shell
(We’ll give her a heart)
To heal her broken wounds
Before she falls apart and her end is soon
(We’ll give her a heart)

[Verse 2]
Hear the clock strike at midnight
When the witch’s wee heart begins to grow
She feels loved in her new rapport
All she needed was somebody that’s worth fighting for
It didn’t take long for a change
And on her back we saw the birth of new fairy wings
The kingdom has to wait no more
Because today marks the end of the icy war

[Pre-Chorus]
Follow me and I’ll show you the way
To fight through her pain and help her love again
We’ll teach her to cease her magic doom
With her vile broom that casts evil voodoo

[Chorus]
We’ll give her a heart
To heal her broken wounds
Before she falls apart and her end is soon
(We’ll give her a heart)
We’ll teach her how to love again
To show her what it means to truly be a friend
(We’ll give her a heart)
We’ll end her unholy spells and her malicious tricks
To fix her broken shell
(We’ll give her a heart)
To heal her broken wounds
Before she falls apart and her end is soon
(We’ll give her a heart)

Slay a bit

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

Yup I can see it That's exactly who I decided to write for too. I was like I HAVE to.

But my song came out Mariah Carey-esque and not so much Tinashe/Aaliyah/Janet/Beyonce

My exact problem. Although the verses are quite Say My Name-ish.

[Aurora]

Here was my song from last week. My theme was "peace".

My Paradise

Verse 1
Right at the edge of my existence
There is a place I need to find
I hear it calling from the distance
For me to leave it all behind
I close my eyes to see completely
And feel it all just melt away
So I won’t let this world defeat me
If life’s a game, I want to play

Pre-Chorus 1
Take a dive into the darkness
Take a leap into the void
Feel the rhythm of the silence
As reality’s destroyed

Chorus (x2)
Need a release
To get me high
Pure inner peace
My paradise
Can’t hear a sound
Lost in my mind
I know I’ve found
My paradise

Verse 2
Living through my imagination
There is a trove I must explore
A journey with no destination
My great escape; a thirst for more
Embraced the beauty of the unknown
Rejuvenated from the rush
Wish I could stay here in my new home
And let the real world fade to dust

Pre-Chorus 2
See the colors start to bleed through
As uncertainty subsides
Every shadow forms a new hue
Bringing everything to life

Chorus (x2)

Hook (x2)
My paradise, my paradise
(I feel myself drifting away)
My paradise, my paradise
(Until I reach another place)

Bridge
Every second takes a heartbeat
Every minute takes a life
If we let these things confine us
Every day becomes a night
Endless searching for the answers
In a world that’s full of lies
So forget about tomorrow
Let today be paradise

Chorus

Hook (x4)

Outro
I’ve found my paradise

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

My exact problem. Although the verses are quite Say My Name-ish.

MC is a staple to R&B/Hip-Hop so I think we'll be fine if it's close to her style. But Say My Name influence sounds amazing I need to see this song when it's done. Mine is similar to Up Out My face/Shake It Off by MC

Originally posted by Sam 

Here was my song from last week. My theme was "peace".

My Paradise

Verse 1
Right at the edge of my existence
There is a place I need to find
I hear it calling from the distance
For me to leave it all behind
I close my eyes to see completely
And feel it all just melt away
So I won’t let this world defeat me
If life’s a game, I want to play

Pre-Chorus 1
Take a dive into the darkness
Take a leap into the void
Feel the rhythm of the silence
As reality’s destroyed

Chorus (x2)
Need a release
To get me high
Pure inner peace
My paradise
Can’t hear a sound
Lost in my mind
I know I’ve found
My paradise

Verse 2
Living through my imagination
There is a trove I must explore
A journey with no destination
My great escape; a thirst for more
Embraced the beauty of the unknown
Rejuvenated from the rush
Wish I could stay here in my new home
And let the real world fade to dust

Pre-Chorus 2
See the colors start to bleed through
As uncertainty subsides
Every shadow forms a new hue
Bringing everything to life

Chorus (x2)

Hook (x2)
My paradise, my paradise
(I feel myself drifting away)
My paradise, my paradise
(Until I reach another place)

Bridge
Every second takes a heartbeat
Every minute takes a life
If we let these things confine us
Every day becomes a night
Endless searching for the answers
In a world that’s full of lies
So forget about tomorrow
Let today be paradise

Chorus

Hook (x4)

Outro
I’ve found my paradise

This is sooo much better than the first song you sent me last week. I love your take on Peace, especially since you snatched #1 too which is what you wanted. Grats so proud of you, it was well deserved!

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

MC is a staple to R&B/Hip-Hop so I think we'll be fine if it's close to her style. But Say My Name influence sounds amazing I need to see this song when it's done. Mine is similar to Up Out My face/Shake It Off by MC

Yeah that's so true!

I think it's done. I'll PM it when I'm at work . Please don't drag it

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Yeah that's so true!

I think it's done. I'll PM it when I'm at work . Please don't drag it

Nice. I'm going to bed soon but I'll read it in the morning. And I normally don't drag songs so no prob!

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

Oh. So whatchu doing going on Tinder dates with guys GS? Your gf okay with that?

nnn I have a fake girlfriend right now (like we both know it's fake and so do some of our friends it's kinda a joke) but they don't know I like men so I decided to join tinder this week and so far everything has been great. I went on a fantastic date today and I'm going on a second date with him on Saturday, although I told him I don't want a relationship right now. And I'm going on a date with another guy tomorrow/today for lunch and he came to see me at work today and we talked for a while until my boss yelled at me. Both are SUPER cute and really cool and I like them
There's also a 3rd guy that's like a god and things might progress with him

And I broke up with my bf like a week ago but I rebound fast

[Era]

GS brings all them tinder guys to the yard I see

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Era

GS brings all them tinder guys to the yard I see

It's a problem
If I didn't have at least a LITTLE restraint I'd have 2 dates set up every day for the next month

Anyways this one guy I went out with today, literally his only drawback is his name (also that he's 23 but I can overlook that)

[Jackson]

He also has 0 good pictures anywhere on his profile or his facebook

[Bloomers]

Congrats GS. Well done

Originally posted by GotSkill

He also has 0 good pictures anywhere on his profile or his facebook

This is a serious problem that affects some people. Nogoodpictureitis needs a cure. I myself can't ever take a picture I'm ever satisfied with...

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Bloomers

Congrats GS. Well done



This is a serious problem that affects some people. Nogoodpictureitis needs a cure. I myself can't ever take a picture I'm ever satisfied with...

I'm actually kinda disappointed in myself because I was gonna try to not date at ALL this summer but I just can't
I literally lasted a week

I think I suffer from it myself tbh. I look way better in the mirror than I do in any of my pics
I come across like one pic a year that I don't want to burn in eternal flames

[Aurora]

Ugh my song is gonna flop so hard this week because I'm just NOT in the mood.

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

Nice. I'm going to bed soon but I'll read it in the morning. And I normally don't drag songs so no prob!

I'm sending you a few different ones

[Pecinta Mariah]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

No, a gf.

a guyfriend

[Aurora]

Honestly feeling like I'm not gonna use my song but I don't really have time to start a new one...

[Buyonce1814]

+o-/

I dressed you up as number one and treated you second to none
It’s over now. It’s over now.
Something made you change your ways and I became the casualty
It’s over now. It’s over now.

[conatus]

Third draft in.

[conatus]

Originally posted by Sam 

Ugh my song is gonna flop so hard this week because I'm just NOT in the mood.

Same. It's just not happening this week like in other weeks for me.