[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by swiftie13

I wrote a rap verse for you a few pages back, Truthy. I was sleepy

Where?

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Motivation though

Personally, I think this song is better.

[Eros]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Is Jhenashe coming for the next hit break up anthem. Single Ladies, who? Heartbreaker, what? Or will it flop like a Kelly Rowland or Nicole song?

I hope so tbh!!!

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Eros

I hope so tbh!!!

You liked the rap?

[UFO]

When you don't like your song anymore, ****!

[Eros]

Truthy had no response to my song what so ever so he obviously hates it!!! Time to scrap the song and start over, smh.

[Golden]

I see people are flopping again.

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by swiftie13

So synphonic, bionic
girl we could be so iconic
hocus pocus in this Focus
lemme get inside your.. lotus

Edit: I'm a genie, rub my bottle
we'll be going at this full throttle
I'm the candy man and you're a model
rub me the right way, that's my motto


Edit 2: I know what a girl wants
I know what a girl needs
if I may have permission
can I touch your body?


Potential rap verse for my soon to be iconic r&b song











Jk

Right here, Truthy

[Eros]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

You liked the rap?

Oh I thought you were reffering to my break up anthem for Jhenashe!!

[UFO]

The struggle

[Eros]

Me rn at this entire experience:



I just can't do it guys, its too hard!

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Eros

Oh I thought you were reffering to my break up anthem for Jhenashe!!

Both would slay in the urban clubs IMO. I sent you both

[UFO]

The amount of amazing concepts I've had to scrap because I can't pull them off

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

The amount of amazing concepts I've had to scrap because I can't pull them off

Me tbh.

My club bop will backfire and radio will ban it. The label won't want to risk it.
My breakup anthem received mixed reviews at the listening party a few weeks go and was bumped for Fireflies.
My introspective song "Jealousy" will probably have Beyonce coming for it's royalties, Blurred Lines style.

[Golden]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

The amount of amazing concepts I've had to scrap because I can't pull them off

Just pull a Beyoncé.

[Era]

I know what I wanna do exactly but I don't exactly know what I wanna do

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Eros

Truthy had no response to my song what so ever so he obviously hates it!!! Time to scrap the song and start over, smh.

Nah, I'm just not allowed to give feedback before you submit

I'll give feedback to swiftie though, cause he obviously won't submit that verse, judging by the

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Era

I know what I wanna do exactly but I don't exactly know what I wanna do

I want someone to make that a line in their song so that Fefe can drag them

[Aurora]

I still want to use some form of, "You say these words don't hurt you, so I'll beat you with a dictionary," in one of my non-PH songs.

[UFO]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

I want someone to make that a line in their song so that Fefe can drag them

I volunteer as tribute

Omg it started raining as soon as I typed that