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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Originally posted by inuborg
Round 4 Song
Title: Overflow
Genre: Rap/Hip Hop
Theme: Confidence
Verse 1:
Yung inu, icy like List-o breath is
No second guessing, bars stay impressive
Pitter-patter flow so they know I’m the bestest
Rap game, come in first, third, and second
This verse got a gun and badge, and your arrested
Don’t care, like bad cops who leave you breathless
Take three shots of me in the morning with your medience
Chocolate skin, so I get my power from my melanin,
And within. And I know my worth, I’m never settling
Hoarding wins, so my name will always be so relevant
Turn your micy up because your not at my decibel
I will take my enemy and make that bitch a decimal
No need to guess, yes that was me at the festival
Clear cut path for me, while your road is illegible
I’m the chosen one, thats why my rhymes are commendable
Still no need for your petty side eyes and subliminals
You know I couldn’t slow down even if I wanted too
Focused, and coasting down the avenues
Rapid flow like Barrettas’ so really what’s the use
My passion red, like that cup full of jesus juice
Chorus:
Turn me up on your radio
And wet your whistle with the overflow
And if you don’t really wanna dance
Put your hands in the air, give the tempo a chance
Turn me up on your speakers please
Cause I’m heavy on the mic, I’ll give you what you need
Just for me, come and rap along
For the mind, one time, I can do no wrong
Verse 2:
Clap your hands, like you’re happy and you know it
As you gather round to the sound of a seasoned poet
Look around, the substance like the center of a donut
But I know my mighty mind makes me a master stoic
They said G’s, they move like Lasagna
But goonies be shakey like, over cooked pasta
Step up your game, and employ a new roster
Ya’ll players are phoney, yeah y’all some imposters
I am high level like Gucci and Prada
Just know why you envy, cause you getting nada
I collect more hoes than old school ball players
I read more foes than Yale english majors
That’s why they know, I’m the savior, the game changer
Stay caked up, my flows come in layers
Cut and serve up guts to any nay-sayers
Step wrong to me and your head’ll be in danger
You got me twisted like caps off a soda
I raise the bar up ante and the quota
Bitches stay mad, turn face like bad odors
Turn sunny days icy with cold shoulders
Chorus:
Turn me up on your radio
And wet your whistle with the overflow
And if you don’t really wanna dance
Put your hands in the air, give the tempo a chance
Turn me up on your speakers please
Cause I’m heavy on the mic, I’ll give you what you need
Just for me, come and rap along
For the mind, one time, I can do no wrong
Verse 3:
All I wanna do is spit a mean sixteen
And lay it on the comp like some fresh whip cream
Jabberwocky flow, I spit that hot fire,
Got goonies and broads scared to expire
While you with those 2.5 men, John Crier
My clique’s full of Ebonys and Mariahs
No problem going down to the wire
Press play, open the scripture and get higher
Electrify I’m the rap game bug zapper
New or old school, I’m better, it don’t matter
Come to the cypher, get hit with that hammer
No mercy, swing first ask questions after
No need to evaluate I know that I am the ****
I’m the only dog in the pound that’s killing it.
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This is dope af!
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 37,384
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Congrats to keshas pears for making it past round 4, the curse doesn't live on!
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
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Quote:
Originally posted by BlueM
I don't get this.
You all said that you liked my song much better this week than in the past two weeks, and I still got my lowest score in the whole competition. 
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That happens to me sometimes.
Sometimes, even if you do better last week, you're still the lowest score.
It has to do with everyone else and how they rank.
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Quote:
Originally posted by conatus
Can't wait for your turn at blocking me from #1. 
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 #2 to infinity 
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 37,384
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
Week
1.
2.
3.
4. | Song
Kingdom
All of Me
#OTF
Beautiful & Deadly | Genre
Dance Pop
Orchestral/R&B
Rap
Dance Pop | Peak
#9
#10
#20
#11 |
Kind of sad to just miss the Top 10, but obviously competition is getting more stiff, and I did submit a song similar to 2 other entries. 
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I read that last one as Beautiful Daddy 
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
Posts: 23,393
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I'm in disbelief. I need to BRING it this week. I've shown I can be technically good but I need to make sure it doesn't come at the expense of the actual content.
I'm so sad to see my sis Pecinta go  .
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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PLΔTINUM CHART
+6
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+5
+6
-2
+11
-2
+10
+2
-4
+9
+4
-12
-5
+13
+6
+5
+5
-4 | 01. Sam
02. conatus
03. lovesong
04. swiftie13
05. GotSkill
06. EuphorianSea
07. 8thPrince
08. inuborg
09. Era
10. dwuw
11. Hugamari
12. keshaspearsxo
13. ClarksonSlays
14. DripDrip
15. Eros
16. BlueM
17. JustLuke
18. Jezang Looz
19. Buyonce1814 | 1 - 3 - 7 - 1
2 - 2 - 2 - 2
10 - 22 - 8 - 3
18 - 12 - 10 - 4
8 - 5 - 3 - 5
24 - 19 - 17 - 6
21 - 4 - 5 - 7
7 - 16 - 18 - 8
14 - 28 - 11 - 9
29 - 7 - 6 - 10
9 - 10 - 20 - 11
5 - 21 - 16 - 12
6 - 9 - 1 - 13
38 - 13 - 9 - 14
42 - 1 - 28 - 15
13 - 23 - 22 - 16
11 - 27 - 24 - 17
27 - 33 - 23 - 18
51 - / - 15 - 19 |
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 43,104
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Out of the Top 10 for the first time
Connor  x1000
Congrats Sam!
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 57,339
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Pretty good top 19. 
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Member Since: 8/31/2013
Posts: 21,462
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Sorry for the dumb question, but are there 3 charts each week:
1. Rank by score
2. Rank by placement
3. Rank by overall season average
or did I make up #3?
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 59,202
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I dont want my first week to be my peak 
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
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swiftie and I; the only ones who have consistently improved
get a whiff of this sis

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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Quote:
Originally posted by feelslikeadream
Sorry for the dumb question, but are there 3 charts each week:
1. Rank by score
2. Rank by placement
3. Rank by overall season average
or did I make up #3?
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#1 and #2 are the same one.
The full ranking is a rank by score and therefore a rank by placement since the scores determine the placement
The PLΔTINUM CHART is a list of statistics that come from the ranking (increases / decreases and chart run)
The PLΔTINUM LEADERBOARD is your #3
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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16 people perched and noone talking
Did the eliminations scare you or is it just the ****** server? 
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 57,339
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Quote:
Originally posted by Truth Teller
16 people perched and noone talking
Did the eliminations scare you or is it just the ****** server? 
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The server.
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 57,339
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Now hurry up with the leaderboard and the challenge so I can go to bed. 
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
Posts: 26,389
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
Week
1.
2.
3.
4. | Song
Kingdom
All of Me
#OTF
Beautiful & Deadly | Genre
Dance Pop
Orchestral/R&B
Rap
Dance Pop | Peak
#9 (78 meta)
#10 (74 meta)
#20 (68 meta)
#11 (71 meta) |
Kind of sad to just miss the Top 10, but obviously competition is getting more stiff, and I did submit a song similar to 2 other entries. 
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Bumping as I put my ratings on there.
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Member Since: 8/31/2013
Posts: 21,462
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Quote:
Originally posted by Truth Teller
#1 and #2 are the same one.
The full ranking is a rank by score and therefore a rank by placement since the scores determine the placement
The PLΔTINUM CHART is a list of statistics that come from the ranking (increases / decreases and chart run)
The PLΔTINUM LEADERBOARD is your #3
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Yeah, I know 1 and 2 present the same data, but you post both of them, one for score, one for placement #s (with the history) and then the LEADERBOARD hasn't been posted for this round, right?
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