[Gladion]

I still have some hours left right

[Era]

Originally posted by GotSkill

LIES your song slays

I finally got the first verse done of mine

idk .... it feels too direct in parts and sometimes very metaphoric

BUT in your taste I trust so

I guess I should take a risk for once

[Jackson]

Originally posted by dwuw

The imaginary is great!

[Stark]

Im on mobile

[Stark]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

I still have some hours left right

No you're out

[Lukey]

omfg, i'm literally stuck on one line for my first verse...

That's it...

I have a small ass bridge like 4 lines, but I think it works, I like it.

What's a word that properly rhymes with "Current"

[Jackson]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

My favourite part is definitely the third line, emotions cascade like the rain, I love that so much.

Originally posted by dwuw

I'd change the line 'emotions cascade...' I don't really like how cascade sounds

[MattyTacos]

When Ari's 3 second cameo in the Scream Queens promo slays your entire existence

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by GotSkill

Listen To me. Thatline is perfect

[Tymps.]

my lips are sO CHAPPED I'M IN A LOT OF PAIN HELP

[Lukey]

Okay, I think I've done it!

I've changed the things someone mentioned, got my bridge and second verse... Fixed my first verse's last line...

I don't wanna send it out and get dragged last minute unable to change it

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by GotSkill

I like the word "elated" in my song but I'll probably get dragged for it because the judges have the vocabulary of 7th grade ESL students

As an 8th grade ESL student I'm insulted

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Tymps.

my lips are sO CHAPPED I'M IN A LOT OF PAIN HELP

Two pieces of advice - you can use average sugar to exfoliate by wetting your lips and rubbing them together with the sugar. Also, use your toothbrush and water on your lips after you brush your teeth.

[Lukey]

Originally posted by Tymps.

my lips are sO CHAPPED I'M IN A LOT OF PAIN HELP

ngl, i just licked my lips as I read this

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Two pieces of advice - you can use average sugar to exfoliate by wetting your lips and rubbing them together with the sugar. Also, use your toothbrush and water on your lips after you brush your teeth.

This, or just buy Chapstick.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Listen To me. Thatline is perfect

I think I will

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by GotSkill

I think I will

It fits the theme and imagery perfectly, I thought it was so good tbh

[Musickid203]

Can someone review my song before I send it in?

[Gladion]

sure musickid

[Temporal]

Waiting for the Paramore concert What's happened in the past 9 hours?