[UFO]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

One trick pony teas. My challenges really manage to seperate the good contestants from the basic ones

More like one trick donkey

[Golden]

Not the closeted homosexual talking about being locked up in a cage though.

[conatus]

I'm used to songs about death and love but this song about war really is testing me.

[Gladion]

Right now, I’m alright, just fine, new beginnings
‘Cause right now, pleasantly, so happy, grinning
Like a bald eagle, positive energy
I’m Red, White, and Blue, learning how to fly free

Thoughts???

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

I predict top 5. If you add some sort of suicidal refernece, preferrably associated with water / drowning, it could win

I didn't even think about that

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by conatus

I'm used to songs about death and love but this song about war really is testing me.

This is the time that I'm supposed to be a good, compassionate host and tell you something encouraging, but in reality, I'm just really happy at how my challenge knocked some of you completely out of your comfort zone and managed to TEST your real skills

[UFO]

Loving this gif tbh, Trisha better werk

[minho]

Writer's block isn't even the beginning.

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Bitch if you're gonna shade everyone else, don't bring me into this

I thought I was one of the few you "like"

It's tough love sis

I won't confirm or deny what I say in our pms

[swiftie13]

I can see the end as it begins

[UFO]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

Right now, I’m alright, just fine, new beginnings
‘Cause right now, pleasantly, so happy, grinning
Like a bald eagle, positive energy
I’m Red, White, and Blue, learning how to fly free

Thoughts???

I'd suggest using something other than a bird metaphor

I feel like you could get dragged for that

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

It's tough love sis

I won't confirm or deny what I say in our pms

Oh...

[conatus]

Originally posted by swiftie13

I can see the end as it begins

I can see at least a couple of the stronger songwriters going home this week.

[UFO]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

It's tough love sis

I won't confirm or deny what I say in our pms

As long as it's still love, I'm fine with it

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by swiftie13

i can see the end as it begins

use this line in your song, i'm semi slayed!!!1!!

[Golden]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Loving this gif tbh, Trisha better werk

Wtf stan for my gif already

[Lukey]

I've got my first verse:

The bridge I walk across has gone
Falling into oblivion
I'm cold, broken, lost and alone
Is this the pathway to heaven
I guess tomorrow I will know
I'm trapped in this deadly current
There is only one way to go

[Golden]

Originally posted by JustLuke

I've got my first verse:

The bridge I walk across has gone
Falling into oblivion
I'm cold, broken, lost and alone
Is this the pathway to heaven
I guess tomorrow I will know
I'm trapped in this deadly current
There is only one way to go

Reads more like a suicide note than a song. I suggest you take it up a few notches since the judges have dragged you for being too bland. Alas, less desperate Adele and more edgy Gaga if you know what I'm talking about

[UFO]

Here's a very, VERY early draft that I thankfully cut out:

You tell me I'm supposedly worth it
Am I supposed to believe in this shit?
Every direction leads to more questions
I'd rather give up than fail and give a fuck
I have doubts before anyone else could
That's all I am: damaged goods

[Gladion]

TT my song has lots of animal metaphors of being happy / free

are you here or not here for this