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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
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This guy trying to tell me I have a receding hairline 
Keep saying **** like this, it will make it easier for me to get over your lame ass.
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Quote:
Originally posted by conatus
I hate this round.
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I personally love it, I just hate me and my insecurities.
WaiT let me write about that.
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My songs rhyme scheme for each stanza right now is:
AAAA
BBBB
ABCB
AABC
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The top 10 hit, Crystalline:
 Crystalline'Crystalline'
VERSE 1
We're two islands, lost in the high tide.
We're so close, and yet so far apart.
We're like diamonds, like ghosts in disguise.
We're like roses, we're works of art.
We got lost in an ocean of echoes,
your name still resounds in my mind.
We crossed our own dark lonely shadows,
it's a shame how we both played blind.
PRE-CHORUS
The shipwreck came sooner than expected
But we know I was the one affected
CHORUS 1
Walking down the coast till the sunset comes.
Hoping the waves could take me to where I belong.
I still feel your ghost following me back home.
I needed you the most, guess my mind was wrong.
in your crystalline ocean is where I got lost.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
VERSE 2
We're two islands, lost in the low tide.
I'm tired of crying, tired of your dirty lies.
I'd like to put everything aside, I'd like.
I tried to forgive you, I really tried.
I lost everything in the blink of an eye
Now I'm just missing the light of my life
I'm missing the way that you used to smile
And I've been like this for a good while
[PRE-CHORUS]
CHORUS 2
Walking down the shore, drowning in quicksand,
I'm a prisoner of you since you first took my hand;
Running to the blue, escaping from the land,
Baby I'll come through, till I get what we once had.
in your crystalline ocean is where I went mad.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
BRIDGE
Your crystalline ocean, seemed so bright.
Your crystal clear ocean, used to be mine.
But day after day, the ocean turned to vapor.
I just asked you to stay, to do me a favor.
Now you're in drought, and I'm full of anger.
You should have answered me, now I'll forget you.
In your crystalline ocean is where it all ended, yeah.
[CHORUS 1 & 2]
OUTRO
The shipwreck came sooner than expected,
But we know I was the one affected.
Now things have changed, sorry to tell you,
In your crystalline ocean, I could forget you.
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Quote:
Originally posted by Truth Teller
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The top 5 dancepop smash Hula Hoop
Hula Hoop
[Intro]
When the music hit, you
Lured us to your orbit
Out a host of bright stars
You beamed like a pulsar
[Verse 1]
You drew a group of swirling clouds
Spun around you like a crown
You’re like a burning sun
(Hey boy, you shocked me, I’m starstruck)
I drift around to catch a glimpse
Of your face throughout the mist
The ruler of this club
(Hey boy, it hit me, I’m in love)
[Prechorus]
Dancing on my toes and pushing through the crowd
Your radiating smile
Pulls and reaches out
Slipping through into the center of the room
I’m hiding from your gaze
Like a new moon
[Chorus]
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Every move, every twist
Spins the crowd around your hips
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Take my dare, grant my wish
Draw me closer by the wrist
[Verse 2]
I gravitate into your sights
I’m your private satellite
But you just play it cool
(Hey, I’m not trying to be strange…)
Just like its rings make Saturn glow
Shrouds it, makes it beautiful
I’ll wrap around you
(…We’ve never met, so what’s your name?)
[Prechorus]
Tell me what I did to make you tilt away
To make an icy look
Cross your pretty face?
As you cross the crowd I’ll follow on your path
I’m sticking close enough
Just to grab your hand
[Chorus]
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Every move, every twist
Spins the crowd around your hips
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Take my dare, grant my wish
Draw me closer by the wrist
[Bridge]
I’ll circle and surround you
I’ll ring myself around you
So that you’ll only run to me
[Chorus]
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Every move, every twist
Spins the crowd around your hips
Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop
Take my dare, grant my wish
Draw me closer by the wrist
[Postchorus]
(Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop)
Draw me into the scene
Let me fall in hard
(Ooh la la, Ooh la ooh
Hula hula hula hoop)
Let me dance, for tonight
Let me be your star
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Quote:
Originally posted by dwuw
The top 10 hit, Crystalline:
Crystalline
'Crystalline'
VERSE 1
We're two islands, lost in the high tide.
We're so close, and yet so far apart.
We're like diamonds, like ghosts in disguise.
We're like roses, we're works of art.
We got lost in an ocean of echoes,
your name still resounds in my mind.
We crossed our own dark lonely shadows,
it's a shame how we both played blind.
PRE-CHORUS
The shipwreck came sooner than expected
But we know I was the one affected
CHORUS 1
Walking down the coast till the sunset comes.
Hoping the waves could take me to where I belong.
I still feel your ghost following me back home.
I needed you the most, guess my mind was wrong.
in your crystalline ocean is where I got lost.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
VERSE 2
We're two islands, lost in the low tide.
I'm tired of crying, tired of your dirty lies.
I'd like to put everything aside, I'd like.
I tried to forgive you, I really tried.
I lost everything in the blink of an eye
Now I'm just missing the light of my life
I'm missing the way that you used to smile
And I've been like this for a good while
[PRE-CHORUS]
CHORUS 2
Walking down the shore, drowning in quicksand,
I'm a prisoner of you since you first took my hand;
Running to the blue, escaping from the land,
Baby I'll come through, till I get what we once had.
in your crystalline ocean is where I went mad.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
BRIDGE
Your crystalline ocean, seemed so bright.
Your crystal clear ocean, used to be mine.
But day after day, the ocean turned to vapor.
I just asked you to stay, to do me a favor.
Now you're in drought, and I'm full of anger.
You should have answered me, now I'll forget you.
In your crystalline ocean is where it all ended, yeah.
[CHORUS 1 & 2]
OUTRO
The shipwreck came sooner than expected,
But we know I was the one affected.
Now things have changed, sorry to tell you,
In your crystalline ocean, I could forget you. |
#DeservedBetter 
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Justluke, Im good with either
I think happiness i'd like better
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Quote:
Originally posted by GotSkill
Talk to me Era!  |
Sorry bae a friend called
But I approve your choices  always do!
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Taking a CALCULATED experimental risk with this song. Its concept is that it reads like its title and the structure mimics its concept 
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@dwuw, your outro is amazing 
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Everything has now been added to the OP!!!
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Quote:
Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
#DeservedBetter |
Thanks. This is just a Style situation. A #6 peak, but actually, it deserves top 5.
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Quote:
Originally posted by Era
Sorry bae a friend called
But I approve your choices always do! |
Yas, can't wait to be slayed by your song again!!
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Quote:
Originally posted by Era
Ok we pick CALM & STORM
GotSkill - Calm
Me - Storm
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NOTED and official!
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Quote:
Originally posted by HausofNiko
Justluke, Im good with either
I think happiness i'd like better
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okay, you can have happiness, i'll do depression 
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What numbers are left Hug is here 
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Quote:
Originally posted by lovesong
@dwuw, your outro is amazing |
Thank you
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The Number One smash:
Ocean Lips
Suck my cockiness
Lick my persuasion
Eat my words and then
Swallow your pride down, down
Place my wants and needs
Over your resistance
And then you come around
You come around
You come around
I want you to be my sex slave
Anything that I desire
Be one with my feminine
Set my whole body on fire
Fair maiden Rihanna gate
Taking over your empire
She may be the queen of hearts
But Imma be the queen of your body parts
No one can do you
The way that I do
Boy I wa-a-ant
(Youuuuuu)
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
Suck my cockiness
Lick my persuasion
Eat my words and then
Swallow your pride down, down
Place my wants and needs
Over your resistance
And then you come around
You come around
You come around
I can be your dominatrix
Just submit to my every order
Enter my diamond matrix
Devour my golden flower
Make me your priority
There's nothing above my pleasure
She may be the queen of hearts
But Imma be the queen of your body parts
No one can do you
The way that I do
Boy I wa-a-ant
(Youuuuuuuu)
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
Homie don't beat it like a bullet
Beat my drum drum
Like a drum line boogie
(I love it when you)
Dive head first if you wanna
Sink to my body
Hold me tight mister lover
(I love it when you)
Do it like I do it
Like I said
Keep it up, boy
We can do this all day
Be my Harlem
And my St. Tropez
Never found nobody
That will do it this way
No one can do you
The way that I do
Boy I wa-a-ant
(Youuuuuu)
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it, I love it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
I love it when you eat it
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