Mess at my only criticism for Bloomers being my superfluous vocabulary
He has a point though. Big words work better in the middle of lines than at the end, where they rhyme with something. That often makes them feel a little clunky.
He has a point though. Big words work better in the middle of lines than at the end, where they rhyme with something. That often makes them feel a little clunky.
I always think it makes them more powerful and impressive but I'll keep that in mind (maybe if I feel like it)
Tymps review of Euphy still giving me life. I should log off
Quote:
Claustrophobia (EuphorianSea) : As usual, I can commend you for your incredulous creativity even in a song that you’ve obviously dumbed down a little for us.
