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Originally posted by moijejoue
You live and you learn, you know?
I don't know if upbeat lyrics are my thing or I don't know if those particular set of lyrics are my thing but I deff didn't want a to be a one genre lyricist. I just wanna expand my horizons and improve my versatility.
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I'll tell you what my problem was. Reading the song, you didn't convince me. Like the use of the word "wack" which noone uses anymore and how you resorted to a lot of cliches ("twerking" -which is also kind of 2013- , turning the **** up etc). That's what most songwriters do when they deal with a topic they're not 100% comfortable with or aware of. It wasn't a bad entry, but I got 33-year old sophisticated former hipster trying to write a song to impress his hip hop loving nephew. I'm not saying that to insult you, I'm just trying to get more specific about what I didn't like so that I can help you
I think youngcalofornka was in his top 10
