[Stark]

Now I don't know which Beach song made TT's top 10.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by dwuw

Now I don't know which Beach song made TT's top 10.

Clarkson and Pecinta

[conatus]

I'm really worried about the good sis moijejoue because there is something great about her songwriting.

[BlueM]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Roses (BlueM) : One of the things I LOVED about your first entry is the stunning imagery and the amazing metaphors and word choices. Where are they? Your round 2 and round 3 entry were somewhere under the break up song umbrella and they didn't really add anything to the typical breakup songs I hear on the radio. This one is better than Another Day In Paradise, but it's still far from how amazing Castle Of Dreams was. It almost feels uninspired in comparison. But you're still a skilled writer with rhyming, meter and all the technicalities, so you'll always have that advantage.

at me flopping again, this time with a song I spent a lot of time and effort writing

[Stark]

Originally posted by Golden

What's tea?

Tymps. gave me a 9.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by conatus

I'm really worried about the good sis moijejoue because there is something great about her songwriting.

There really is, I saw a lot of potential too, especially in round 1. I think this entry was an experiment that imo went wrong

[Stark]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Clarkson and Pecinta

[UFO]

So close it hurts
I fear the worst
I trust your words
My vision's blurred

Multi-interpreting chanteuse! A sex song with an empowering message.

Tbh I love writing songs that I relate to, it helps when I sing them to myself if my anxiety starts flaring up.

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

I thought you'd at least be a little excited @ us making it til the end.

But no you want us Libras to fight. Get over here

Because I thought YOU wouldn't make it til the end so I didn't want to be so DAMN insensitive. Omfg my eyes are moist. I hate you and your hidden Librarian agenda. Yeah, that's right! I bet you regret skinny-dipping with me now.

[Stark]

Well, I wasn't in Truth Teller's top 10 last round either but I was #7.

Bye boo boo.

[Jezang Looz]

Same Place (swiftie13) : Well damn! That was free of flaws tbh. You took all our advice from round 1 and round 2 and finally found a way to turn your beautiful imagery and advanced vocabulary into a coherent, unified concept. You nailed it. The images are better and more moving than ever, your concept is easy to connect to emotionally and your approach was ideal ; not warm enough to be childish but not cold enough to be unrelatable. It's like a wise poet writing a sweet song about childhood LOVED it Nitpicking : the "bark" line was a no-no / Advice : use "that" instead of "which" cause most of the time it sounds better

Aww this makes me so happy he loves Bob's Burgers so I auto love him too

Congrats Swiftie!!

[Golden]

How's my Libra sis doing?

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by dwuw

Well, I wasn't in Truth Teller's top 10 last round either but I was #7.

Bye boo boo.

Last week you were #11 on my ranking and I was your second highest scorer

[UFO]

Originally posted by Golden

How's my Libra sis doing?

Amazingly well, thanks for asking

[Stark]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Last week you were #11 on my ranking and I was your second highest scorer

Hey boo boo.

[keshaspearsxo]

Tree (keshaspearsxo) : That's more like it. This is your best entry in this season so far. I do notice a change of pace compared to your usual style and it's appreciated. You pulled it off, the song manages to convey happiness, carelessness and optimism with a well hidden taste of depression cause it wouldn't be your song without it The post-chorus was my favorite part, simple, but extremely touching. I also thought the chorus was super sweet and well written. One piece of advice I have for you is that I think you work best when the feeling is insinuated rather than stated. "The feeling that I have right now is I'm free" and "I feel like my life's complete" didn't quite work for me.

The depression was so well hidden I didn't even realise it existed no, I know exactly what you mean, I'm glad you got it

I think I kinda get what you mean about making a feeling insinuated rather than stated but it's a little confusing too so I might pm you or something

[conatus]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

There really is, I saw a lot of potential too, especially in round 1. I think this entry was an experiment that imo went wrong

She just seems to have some really interesting stuff to say. And it's done in this really unique way. I don't know.

[UFO]

Can't wait to finish in the top 20 again, that's like 15 other hoes who did worse than me

My self-esteem is rising...

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Because I thought YOU wouldn't make it til the end so I didn't want to be so DAMN insensitive. Omfg my eyes are moist. I hate you and your hidden Librarian agenda. Yeah, that's right! I bet you regret skinny-dipping with me now.

I honestly didn't know if I would too but I got my ish together.

The live shows are about to get dirty I hope ur rdy

[moijejoue]

Welp. Congrats to 8thPrince and Connor for making the top ten.

[Pecinta Mariah]

Sea And Thunder ( Pecinta Mariah) : THE BRIDGE
AND THE OUTRO The song is
conceptually excellent . You being the sea and the
other person being the thunder is genius and the
way you structured it and brought it to life is
exceptional, especially in terms of vocabulary . I
just want you to pay attention to stressing the
right syllables and to maintaining a consistent
meter, cause most contestants have already
solved these issues

bitch, I'm so glad you like my bridge and outro. those are my favorite part of this song. Too bad FeeFee didn't like it