My song sounded cute in concept but ended up essentially being about a creepy and annoying bitch who won't leave a guy who's clearly not interested alone in the club
The drought was the very worst
When the flowers that we'd grown together died of thirst
It was months, and months of back and forth
You're still all over me like a wine-stained dress I can't wear anymore
Hung my head as I lost the war, and the sky turned black like a perfect storm
The drought was the very worst
When the flowers that we'd grown together died of thirst
It was months, and months of back and forth
You're still all over me like a wine-stained dress I can't wear anymore
Hung my head as I lost the war, and the sky turned black like a perfect storm
**** it, I just read/sung my song to myself again and I love it. It's so TRUE and REAL. The lyrics are on point, the analogies are on point, the flow is on point, the storyline is on point. Honestly this is probably my favourite song that I've ever written, out of any song, including all of my songs last season.
I hope our interpretations of the challenge are strongly reflected in the scoring. I want drags for originality, creativity, tackiness and interest.
I mean I feel like I couldn't have put flowers in my song anymore. There was some mention of flowers in every section of my song (besides my outro) and I made use of both a physical use of flowers and a metaphorical comparison of flowers being like days in our lives, as well as memories and feelings. So hopefully this will be enough. Plus the damn song is called "Flowers"!
I swear for me writing a new song every week is trying to write a debut, lead single with smash potential that you hope the critics love and the GP will buy and it charts well to get you that #1 spot. Over and over again. It's work... A LOT OF WORK!
I mean I feel like I couldn't have put flowers in my song anymore. There was some mention of flowers in every section of my song (besides my outro) and I made use of both a physical use of flowers and a metaphorical comparison of flowers being like days in our lives, as well as memories and feelings. So hopefully this will be enough. Plus the damn song is called "Flowers"!
Nnnn that's not really what I meant, but sure. I was talking more about the jnterpretation of the pictures rather than how often you used a word. Like, for example, a sex song for the under wear picture is no creative. That is a mental dud. A concept which takes no thought. No shade to you, but a death song / song about loss for flowers. Not necessarily bad, but could be more interesting perhaps with something like the bed picture or the car picture. Not saying it's bad but hopefully entries which took more creativity in creating a concept get their fair dos compared to something which could be used in, like, pretty much any round.
My song definitely isn't anything revolutionary for me and far from my favorite song but its something I really needed to write and everyone that read it loved it
...is he (she)?
It's so TRUE and REAL. The lyrics are on point, the analogies are on point, the flow is on point, the storyline is on point. Honestly this is probably my favourite song that I've ever written, out of any song, including all of my songs last season. 
