[Slayley]

Idk it just feels so out of place

[Lukey]

Originally posted by Slayley

Idk it just feels so out of place

I did just make it now

I'll tweak it


If not, scrapping this outro.

[Aurora]

TT did you end up sending off the first batch?

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Sam 

TT did you end up sending off the first batch?

I forgot all about this Just got my breakfast. Where you at TT?

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Slayley

Idk it just feels so out of place

I kind of agree, but I don't know the context of the full song so it's hard to say by just looking at the outro.

[Stark]

I'll dodge the shower sounds fun

[Aurora]

Re-reading my song and just hoping the judges appreciate it for what it is.

[BlueM]

Originally posted by Sam 

Re-reading my song and just hoping the judges appreciate it for what it is.

same here, especually after my flop last week

[Lukey]

Originally posted by dwuw

I'll dodge the shower sounds fun

Oh.

[Lukey]

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without no light, there's no power (8)
So I give you this final rose (8)
I know I'm not the one you chose (8)

Or no.

Wait, I think I have something else.

[Stark]

Originally posted by JustLuke

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without no light, there's no power (8)
So I give you this final rose (8)
I know I'm not the one you chose (8)

Or no.

Wait, I think I have something else.

Yes!!

[Aurora]

Originally posted by JustLuke

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without no light, there's no power (8)
So I give you this final rose (8)
I know I'm not the one you chose (8)

Or no.

Wait, I think I have something else.

Without light, there is no power

Sounds better.

[Lukey]

Originally posted by Sam 

Without light, there is no power

Sounds better.

Oh I just did this:

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without a light, there's no power (8)
So before I lose my colour (8)
I'll leave and go find another (8)

I'll change that lyric to that though, as I agree.

But that outro or this one?

[■YoungCalifornia■]

Do we normally get hints on Thursdays or Fridays?

[Aurora]

Originally posted by JustLuke

Oh I just did this:

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without a light, there's no power (8)
So before I lose my colour (8)
I'll leave and go find another (8)

I'll change that lyric to that though, as I agree.

But that outro or this one?

I like both. It's up to you.

Originally posted by ■YoungCalifornia■

Do we normally get hints on Thursdays or Fridays?

Probably Fridays as Thursday is the deadline and usually there's still some last minute entries. Possibly very vague hints from some judges about some batches on the Thursdays.

[Lukey]

Originally posted by Sam 

I like both. It's up to you.



Probably Fridays as Thursday is the deadline and usually there's still some last minute entries. Possibly very vague hints from some judges about some batches on the Thursdays.

Okay, thanks.

[Aurora]

I need to NOT overthink this because I'm starting to stress about things that I know aren't true in regards to my song.

[BlueM]

Originally posted by JustLuke

Oh I just did this:

(Outro)
Too much water kills a flower (8)
Without a light, there's no power (8)
So before I lose my colour (8)
I'll leave and go find another (8)

I'll change that lyric to that though, as I agree.

But that outro or this one?

I like both as well. I like the rhyming of this a bit more I think

[Jezang Looz]

The picture alone for Clouds inspires me so much Me trying to break into the top of the charts

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

The picture alone for Clouds inspires me so much Me trying to break into the top of the charts

Good luck sis. Hope we can both make it into the Top 10 this week.