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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
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Btw Truthy don't expect much from my Candles song
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Would an ABCB DEDE rhyme scheme for verses work?
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Reading dwuw's song like

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Originally posted by Truth Teller
Beach
1. ClarksonSlays
2. dwuw
3. Pecinta Mariah
4. Obsession | Bed
1. inuborg
2.
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4. | Candles
1. Element
2. Nait Phoenix
3. Keshafied
4. | Cars
1. posh
2.
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4. | Clouds
1. Jezang Looz
2. Hugamari
3.
4. | Disco ball
1. conatus
2. moijejoue
3. 8thPrince
4. | Flowers
1. JustLuke
2. Sam
3. Saint
4.BlueM | Gun
1. Buyonce1814
2. highdefinition
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4. | Money
1. HausofNiko
2. YoungCalifornia
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4. | Trees
1. keshaspearsxo
2. Blue.
3. swiftie13
4. GotSkill | Underwear
1. The Original High
2. EuphorianSea
3. Eros
4. DripDrip | Window
1. Era
2. lovesong
3. Musickid203
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Who didn't sign up yet? I count 33
But no, by "we" I mean we're all dying to know (except for that 1 person who's MIA)

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Jackson loved it. You aren't ready Truthy

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Originally posted by lovesong
Would an ABCB DEDE rhyme scheme for verses work?
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Originally posted by Jezang Looz
Who didn't sign up yet? I count 33
But no, by "we" I mean we're all dying to know (except for that 1 person who's MIA)

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Some member named Kesha Rose. He would have been eliminated in round 2 but some judge (not me) saved him, so now I have to send him 3 reminder PMs to sign up like I did in round 2. Fun fun fun fun

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Originally posted by Truth Teller
I bully everyone, don't feel special.
Plus, it's better to be bullied by the host than to be bullied by one of the contestants, so at least you're on that level

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Quote:
Originally posted by Truth Teller
Some member named Kesha Rose. He would have been eliminated in round 2 but some judge (not me) saved him, so now I have to send him 3 reminder PMs to sign up like I did in round 2. Fun fun fun fun

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Fair enough so 34 contestants with a possible 6-8 elimination round.
26-28 will make it to round 4. Woo we're getting closer to the end

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Crystalline
'Crystalline'
VERSE 1
We're two islands, lost in the high tide.
We're so close, and yet so far apart.
We're like diamonds, like ghosts in disguise.
We're like roses, we're works of art.
We got lost in an ocean of echoes,
your name still resounds in my mind.
We crossed our own dark lonely shadows,
it's a shame how we both played blind.
PRE-CHORUS
The shipwreck came sooner than expected
But we know I was the one affected
CHORUS 1
Walking down the coast till the sunset comes.
Hoping the waves could take me to where I belong.
I still feel your ghost following me back home.
I needed you the most, guess my mind was wrong.
in your crystalline ocean is where I got lost.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
VERSE 2
We're two islands, lost in the low tide.
I'm tired of crying, tired of your dirty lies.
I'd like to put everything aside, I'd like.
I tried to forgive you, I really tried.
I lost everything in the blink of an eye
Now I'm just missing the light of my life
I'm missing the way that you used to smile
And I've been like this for a good while
[PRE-CHORUS]
CHORUS 2
Walking down the shore, drowning in quicksand,
I'm a prisoner of you since you first took my hand;
Running to the blue, escaping from the land,
Baby I'll come through, till I get what we once had.
in your crystalline ocean is where I went mad.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
BRIDGE
Your crystalline ocean, seemed so bright.
Your crystal clear ocean, used to be mine.
But day after day, the ocean turned to vapor.
I just asked you to stay, to do me a favor.
Now you're in drought, and I'm full of anger.
You should have answered me, now I'll forget you.
In your crystalline ocean is where it all ended, yeah.
[CHORUS 1 & 2]
OUTRO
The shipwreck came sooner than expected,
But we know I was the one affected.
Now things have changed, sorry to tell you,
In your crystalline ocean, I could forget you.

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The king of pop truly has such an amazing discography 
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Originally posted by Slayley
The king of pop truly has such an amazing discography 
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Thanks

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Originally posted by dwuw
Crystalline
'Crystalline'
VERSE 1
We're two islands, lost in the high tide.
We're so close, and yet so far apart.
We're like diamonds, like ghosts in disguise.
We're like roses, we're works of art.
We got lost in an ocean of echoes,
your name still resounds in my mind.
We crossed our own dark lonely shadows,
it's a shame how we both played blind.
PRE-CHORUS
The shipwreck came sooner than expected
But we know I was the one affected
CHORUS 1
Walking down the coast till the sunset comes.
Hoping the waves could take me to where I belong.
I still feel your ghost following me back home.
I needed you the most, guess my mind was wrong.
in your crystalline ocean is where I got lost.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
VERSE 2
We're two islands, lost in the low tide.
I'm tired of crying, tired of your dirty lies.
I'd like to put everything aside, I'd like.
I tried to forgive you, I really tried.
I lost everything in the blink of an eye
Now I'm just missing the light of my life
I'm missing the way that you used to smile
And I've been like this for a good while
[PRE-CHORUS]
CHORUS 2
Walking down the shore, drowning in quicksand,
I'm a prisoner of you since you first took my hand;
Running to the blue, escaping from the land,
Baby I'll come through, till I get what we once had.
in your crystalline ocean is where I went mad.
in your crystal, crystal, crystalline. [x2]
BRIDGE
Your crystalline ocean, seemed so bright.
Your crystal clear ocean, used to be mine.
But day after day, the ocean turned to vapor.
I just asked you to stay, to do me a favor.
Now you're in drought, and I'm full of anger.
You should have answered me, now I'll forget you.
In your crystalline ocean is where it all ended, yeah.
[CHORUS 1 & 2]
OUTRO
The shipwreck came sooner than expected,
But we know I was the one affected.
Now things have changed, sorry to tell you,
In your crystalline ocean, I could forget you.

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The ending of the bridge seemed off to me but very beautiful imagery.

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Originally posted by dwuw
Thanks

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That's cute but I'm listening to Michael Jackson

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Speculate to break the one you hate
Circulate the lie you confiscate
Assassinate and mutilate
As the hounding media in hysteria
Who's the next for you to resurrect
JFK exposed the CIA
Truth be told the grassy knoll
As the blackmail story in all your glory
It's slander
You say it's not a sword
But with your pen you torture men
You'd crucify the Lord
And you don't have to read it, read it
And you don't have to eat it, eat it
To buy it is to feed it, feed it
So why do we keep foolin' ourselves
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
Though everybody wants to read all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual, actual
They say he's homosexual
In the hood
Frame him if you could
Shoot to kill
To blame him if you will
If he dies sympathize
Such false witnesses
Damn self righteousness
In the black
Stab me in the back
In the face
To lie and shame the race
Heroine and Marilyn
As the headline stories of
All your glory
It's slander
With the words you use
You're a parasite in black and white
Do anything for news
And you don't go and buy it, buy it
And they won't glorify it, 'fy it
To read it sanctifies it, 'fies it
Then why do we keep foolin' ourselves
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
Everybody wants to read all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
See, but everybody wants to believe all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
See, but everybody wants to believe all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual, actual
She's blonde and she's bisexual
Scandal
With the words you use
You're a parasite in black and white
Do anything for news
And you don't go and buy it, buy it
And they won't glorify it, 'fy it
To read it sanctifies it, 'fies it
Why do we keep foolin' ourselves
Slander
You say it's not a sin
But with your pen you torture men
Then why do we keep foolin' ourselves
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
Though everybody wants to read all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
See, but everybody wants to read all about it
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual
Just because you read it in a magazine
Or see it on the TV screen
Don't make it factual, actual
You're so damn disrespectable
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What's tea

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What's tea

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Slayley is about to snatch you as the most active non-contestant

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Where's lovesong? I just listened to his favorite Kylie album (I think) 
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Originally posted by Truth Teller
Slayley is about to snatch you as the most active non-contestant

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I'm still 150 posts behind but thanks for the encouraging words 
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Slayley is about to snatch you as the most active non-contestant

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The difference between me and Silly is that I have personality & talent.

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