Quote:
Originally posted by Buyonce1814
Yeah that's the one. Aah fair enough. It would be great but I wouldn't want you to go out of your way  . |
The best part of the song was the amazing vocabulary that helped the message get across. It also had tight rhyming, good pace and it was overall a vast improvement over Baby I'm Through. The only shortcomings were the Pharaoh line which was a little too heavy for the romantic, feel good vibe of the song (but I get the metaphor) and "reprised", but it was an incredibly strong entry and would have probably made the top 20 of the ranking if it was submitted in round 2
