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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
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It usually takes me 15 minutes to write a song
Then I go back and edit it a bit
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I'm so worthy
I don't think you heard me
Get my name and number
Like the back of my jersey
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aasdfadf not -12!!
I definitely need to bring it for round 3. Anything can happen in this game.
My  song
"Together Again"
A break in the silence, is all that i’m asking for
Its become as if i’ve never known you before
Memories can only do so much for a person
And staying away only leads to more inversion
Our shadows cross, i’m stuck on the wall
You light up the room, light up my thoughts
I wonder if you still think of me
Or ever wonder what could have been
CHORUS:
Flashbacks to those days we shared
Summer nights, when we both cared
It hasn’t been the same as of late
But still, a part of my mind that says
That one day, we will be, together again
One day we will be, together again
if anyone's wondering.
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Week
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2. | Song
Stillness
Together Again | Genre
Trip Hop
Pop Ballad | Peak
#10
#22 |
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Slay @conatus !!! You and Sam really have a talent of songwriting. Congrats on being at the top overall too. 
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Quote:
Originally posted by lovesong
Week
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2. | Song
Stillness
Together Again | Genre
Trip Hop
Pop Ballad | Peak
#10
#22 |
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Slay @conatus !!! You and Sam really have a talent of songwriting. Congrats on being at the top overall too. |
Your song was great! 
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Also, I think I'm writing another non-challenge song, sort of like "I Gotta Know" was a pre-Season 7 track.  It's going well so far. It's got a Ciara or even Mariah Carey type vibe to it.
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sam
Also, I think I'm writing another non-challenge song, sort of like "I Gotta Know" was a pre-Season 7 track. It's going well so far. It's got a Ciara or even Mariah Carey type vibe to it. |
Yass, you should show when you finish
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Member Since: 2/5/2014
Posts: 29,111
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I didn't get a chance to post my last.fm grid a few pages back...
So, I thought, why not now?
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+20 woo, I'm so happy. Congrats to everyone to got into round 2!!
Here's my song if anyone wanted to have a peak. Also, thanks Nait Phoenix for proof reading and helping me.
Fantasy
Fantasy
She carved her name deep in the great oak tree,
Symbolizing her dreams she wished to foresee,
Inside her head a dark battle awaits,
For on this night, she pleads and she prays,
Clearing her mind with a line of cocaine,
Bewildered in the illusion that her sanity blockades,
Depression seeps and she turns to the blade,
Although she's a fighter, her bed has been made.
Stick and stones won't break her bones,
Cuts from her knife makes her feel alive,
Ignoring the warnings and her mothers advice,
If she's not careful, she will pay the price.
Fantasy of darkness,
Fantasy of dreams,
Rebel of the night time,
She can't chase her dreams,
Queen of the black heart,
Seduction of the w-h-o-r-e-s,
But will she be the fantasy,
The fantasy of yours?
*Not sure if they were the exact ones I sent it in, but wouldn't be too far off.
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Here's mine. I'm late too, but who cares? 
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Yas @ GDFR and Reclassified
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Quote:
Originally posted by dwuw
Yas @ GDFR and Reclassified
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GDFR is THE bop.  I think I might get Flo's EP, but I don't like the Dr. Luke song at all. 
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Member Since: 2/5/2014
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All That is one of the best songs of the year
I do love G.D.F.R also.
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sam
GDFR is THE bop. I think I might get Flo's EP, but I don't like the Dr. Luke song at all. |
Which one is Dr. Luke song? I've only heard GDFR and the collab with Robin Thicke and they both SLAY.  I might give the EP a try ddd
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Comeback results today? 
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Quote:
Originally posted by Bloomers
All That is one of the best songs of the year |
It really is.
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Originally posted by dwuw
Which one is Dr. Luke song? I've only heard GDFR and the collab with Robin Thicke and they both SLAY. I might give the EP a try ddd |
One In A Lifetime, I think it's called. Eh, it's just bland.
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Oh, btw here's my #3 hit "Happy":
Happy
Verse
I capture every wish just like a bottled firefly
With hopes that someday soon they’ll bring back color to my sky
And as the twinkling twilight slowly carries me away
I dream that my tomorrow will outshine my yesterday
But like a dream, a firefly just shouldn’t be contained
What once was there is dead and gone, now just a shell remains
A figment of the fantasies that slowly fall apart
Illuminates the undisclosed desires of my heart
Pre-Chorus
So over feeling underwhelmed with every passing day
I need a little thunder just to keep my heart awake
And I can’t help but wonder, what’s the reason I should stay?
Chorus
All I really have to be is happy
But I just can’t find a way, every moment fades to grey
All I really need to feel is happy
Like the smile of a child, just to make it all worthwhile
So I’ll try and try again, while I hide it from my friends
Now’s the time to play pretend, then I’ll cry at each day’s end
All I really want to know is happy
So today I will forget, as I haven’t found it yet
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sam
It really is.
One In A Lifetime, I think it's called. Eh, it's just bland. |
I'm listening to it and I'm not liking that autotuned voice in the background 
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