I feel like none of this makes sense whereas you easily point out to other people they don't have no damn rhythm or whatever and TELL them how to fix it
Like, I haven't commented on any of my reviews yet just because they don't make sense. What is this!
I'm not complaining I just need answers even though I'm gone anyway
While I'm on this, I didn't like that comment that my song was underworked because it alluded to me not putting any effort into this, whereas it couldn't be any more wrong. I wrote 6 songs this week each about completely different topics (unrequited love, gay youth, social commentary etc.), trying to come up with ANYTHING to impress you all so please don't.
Banal language : basic, predictable, non-exciting vocabulary choices
Little impact : I read it and forgot every single line after 10 seconds despite the fact my excellent memory allows me to remember at least one or two lines from at least 30 out of the 41 entries
Not focused : little coherency, barely any real message being conveyed
GotSkill his straight-acting weave ain't safe!
