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Eros - Firework : Wow  This was a truly incredible entry, I was speechless while reading. First of all, you had one of the strongest (maybe even the strongest) chorusese of round 2. And the pre-chorus leads to it in such a flawless way too, so the 1-2 punch is real  The rhyming was incredible and professional and so was the meter and all the other technicalities I don't even need to mention in your case. My only problem with this song is the choice of 2 pretty pedestrian lines in the verse : legit and cup. Other than that, I have nothing else to point out. 
Firework (Eros) - The rhyming and structure were on point. Liked the tone, but too many of the lines were awkwardly worded just to fit the meter (fingertips can’t support the weight of bricks; how do fireworks “start to crack”?; “endless” is not an adverb).
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Aww, I'm really happy with my critiques. Feelslikeadream, you're right endless isn't an adverb. I probably should've found a different word to say the same thing. And the fingertip line was a visual I was trying to paint because during that part of the song its like I was drowning and didn't know if I would rather sink or swim up. Which I'm sure you got, but it was just a metaphor I really wanted to play with, I actually like that line a lot. And fireworks do crack, its the noise they produce right before they explode. And that's the feeling I was trying to portray during the chorus. Probably should've thought of something else to say the same thing with that line as well. But I'm glad both you and TT liked the tone and rhyming and structure. Thanks for taking time to write out a review you guys!
