Just submitted my entry. I hope it's good enough. There are some parts I'm really, really happy with and others that I'm second guessing, but overall I'm happy () with how it's turned out. It's not as metaphorical as my last entry though and is a lot more raw which could be my downfall. I just hope the judges like it for what it is!
Name hold weight like kilos
Boy, you actin' so corny like Fritos
Wouldn’t have none of that without me though
Ain’t none of my business, it's tea though
Outta ammo, gotta reload
If life was a game, you're a free throw
It's nothing that you don’t already know
I hope it's good enough. There are some parts I'm really, really happy with and others that I'm second guessing, but overall I'm happy (
) with how it's turned out. It's not as metaphorical as my last entry though and is a lot more raw which could be my downfall. I just hope the judges like it for what it is!
