[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

I was paid dust in the ATRL Songwriters thread. I want critique to this please >

http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...04900#27704900

It's a great piece that showcases your potential

All I can say as a shortcoming is that you made your source of inspiration very obvious, but I think that's what you were going for anyway, so it's fine

[Truth Teller]

Niko coming for the first rap Christmas album?

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Ceiling Of Fate, ha early impact

Euphorian is really soo inspiring tbh.

Through his strength, I will reach inside, trust the voice within, and try my best

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

It's a great piece that showcases your potential

All I can say as a shortcoming is that you made your source of inspiration very obvious, but I think that's what you were going for anyway, so it's fine

Yeah I really just listened to the song and made my own words to it with her voice in my head .

[posh]

I showed my friend a bit of my song and he actually called one of the lines iconic.

Not saying I agree with him or anything, but what a sweet compliment.

[MattyTacos]

If you wanna be with me
Baby, there's a price to pay
I'm a genie in a bottle
You gotta rub me the right way
If you wanna be with me
I can make your wish come true

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by posh

I showed my friend a bit of my song and he actually called one of the lines iconic.

Not saying I agree with him or anything, but what a sweet compliment.

Lemme guess his sexual orientation real quickT

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

If you wanna be with me
Baby, there's a price to pay
I'm a genie in a bottle
You gotta rub me the right way
If you wanna be with me
I can make your wish come true

Are you having a Legend X day? Picking all the right tracks I see

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Lemme guess his sexual orientation real quickT

Exactly what I was thinking

[posh]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Lemme guess his sexual orientation real quickT

A girl can never have enough GBFs.

[Temporal]

Still have Gaga stuck in my head after yesterday's concert

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by posh

A girl can never have enough GBFs.

I'm jealous af. All my friends are str8 guys and gurls and I'm ****ing bored. I need someone to watch Mean Girls and discuss charts and fleeting with

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Still have Gaga stuck in my head after yesterday's concert

I would cry too

[posh]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

I'm jealous af. All my friends are str8 guys and gurls and I'm ****ing bored. I need someone to watch Mean Girls and discuss charts and fleeting with

I hate Mean Girls, and I don't even know what fleeting is. #gaybutnotnarrow

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by posh

I hate Mean Girls, and I don't even know what fleeting it. #gaybutnotnarrow

Poor whoever tops you. The D will like like a Picasso early draft

[Gladion]

what is "fleeting with"

[Temporal]

Will I ever write a happy song?

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Will I ever write a happy song?

Lana teas

[Hugamari]

Not posh saying he hates Mean Girls.

Let me clean my friends list here quick.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Lana teas

If I ever get a boyfriend I'm sure I'll flip on a dime but right now it's like, what is my inspiration?