[Stark]

Originally posted by posh

Here's what I've got for the chorus so far:

Touch my body, serve abuse
You may be my brother, but that's no excuse
Daddy come here, mom is gone
Let's get it on like donkey kong

I don't know. I'm trying to get kinky with it.

Radio would love it

[Hugamari]

posh, I can't

It speaks to me on a spiritual level and is so relatable.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by posh

Here's what I've got for my chorus so far:

Touch my body, serve abuse
You may be my brother, but that's no excuse
Daddy come here, mom is gone
Let's get it on like donkey kong

I don't know. I'm trying to get kinky with it.

What is this about???

My third stanza slaying though Time for the chorus.

[Jezang Looz]

My song literally reads like a prayer. I wanted to do an uptempo but I can't think of a melody so I'm gonna send what I have. Here it is for those that are curious inspired by true feelings.

SEE YOU AGAIN

LYRICS

[Verse 1]
Prayed for so long to find someone like you
I never gave up even though you were a fool
Still I moved on hoping you’d come back through
But the pain is strong I can see you’re hurting too
What do we do when we’re both worlds apart
Talking to myself to figure out what went wrong
Still have my doubts if I will find the one
But I pray to God hoping that His will be done

[Chorus]
Look up to the sky and say
I hope that I’ll see you again
Down on my knees I pray
That you’ll want me more than a friend
We watch the sun rise every day
And at sunset I’ll kneel and pray
That it won’t be too long
Until I see you again

[Lukey]

Originally posted by posh

Here's what I've got for my chorus so far:

Touch my body, serve abuse
You may be my brother, but that's no excuse
Daddy come here, mom is gone
Let's get it on like donkey kong

I don't know. I'm trying to get kinky with it.

What is it with everyone trying to get plays on gospel radio

Maybe my song will stand out

[Hugamari]

The rhyme scheme confused me, because I got used to it, then you threw a curve ball

[moijejoue]

Ladies, help me out here.


How would you define primadonna?

[conatus]

I re-wrote IBMY. About to send it to the people who have already seen the previous draft.

[Golden]

[posh]

Originally posted by moijejoue

Ladies, help me out here.


How would you define primadonna?

Someone who has a Starring Role, or at least thinks they do, in either a literal or social context. They think the world owes them something because of how "talented and beautiful" they are. Basically, a classy way to call someone a diva.

[Stark]

Originally posted by Golden

I've changed some things in my song, do you want to read it?

[Jezang Looz]

Getting the gorlz bothered I see.



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[conatus]

All these gorls trying to follow suit and slay with a religious song.

Been there, done that. I'm the true original.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by conatus

I re-wrote IBMY. About to send it to the people who have already seen the previous draft.

Swag, I'm about to send you my full song.

[conatus]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Swag, I'm about to send you my full song.

[■YoungCalifornia■]

I predict a #24 peak for Jezang Looz

[Lukey]

Golden, can you read my song please

[Golden]

Send me what you wanna send.

[moijejoue]

Originally posted by posh

Someone who has a Starring Role, or at least things they do, in either a literal or social context. They think the world owes them something because of how "talented and beautiful" they are. Basically, a classy way to call someone a diva.

Thanks. I thought it strictly was to mean a starring role in an opera play.

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by ■YoungCalifornia■

I predict a #24 peak for Jezang Looz

Steady climbing I see

Funny how some can receive but can't give their fair dues. I stop the wooooorld. Stop.

Carry on.