[conatus]

But my title is in my chorus four times...

[UFO]

Originally posted by JustLuke

Poor dwuwu

Omg that unintentional shade

[Stark]

[UFO]

Originally posted by conatus

But my title is in my chorus four times...

But it serves a purpose, "Dear God I wanna fly find a cure Dear God I wanna fight Dear God Dear God" doesn't

[OreGuy]

Can you judges chop just few (10 minimum) contestant in this round because some are just in first try so with Round 1's advices/comments, we can use them and do great in Round 2 where then you can do a killing spree?

[Rider]

Where can I see the entries?

[UFO]

Originally posted by OreGuy

Can you judges chop just few (10 minimum) contestant in this round because some are just in first try so with Round 1's advices/comments, we can use them and do great in Round 2 where then you can do a killing spree?

Yes, I agree!

We deserve a second chance at least.

This game is more about the GROWTH anyways.

[conatus]

Yeah, I feel like it's really hard to truly judge someone's songwriting ability on a verse and a chorus. That's why I'm glad only 15 (?) people are being eliminated.

[conatus]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Yes, I agree!

We deserve a second chance at least.

This game is more about the GROWTH anyways.

Haven't you taken part before, though?

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Phaedo

Where can I see the entries?

You can't unless the writers post them.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Phaedo

Where can I see the entries?

You can only see them if contestants choose to post theirs in the thread.

[UFO]

Originally posted by conatus

Yeah, I feel like it's really hard to truly judge someone's songwriting ability on a verse and a chorus. That's why I'm glad only 15 (?) people are being eliminated.

I feel like the eliminations will definitely be double digits

[Stark]

Originally posted by Phaedo

Where can I see the entries?

They aren't posted. If someone wants to post their entry, they can, but the host/judges will never post them.

This is mine:

Run

VERSE 1
My road began long time ago,
and since then I've been walking
till I find my twin soul

And I've fought some obstacles
And I'll fight what is to come
Even though what I'm doing,
they say is illogical

PRE-CHORUS 1
I'm tired of walking
But I know I can't give up
So I look at my reflection
and say, 'now,
it's time to run'

CHORUS
And I'll run, run, run
'till I reach the end
And I'll run, run, run
even if I lose my breath
and I'll run, run, run
'till I finish what I started
and I'll run, run, run
'till I find my other half

And I don't care about the time I waste,
if I'm searching for you, babe,
I'll do whatever it takes to find you,
to find you, my girl.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Phaedo

Where can I see the entries?

The entries are private, only the judges and I can see them until the contestants decide to post them inside the thread. Stay tuned

[UFO]

Originally posted by conatus

Haven't you taken part before, though?

What do you mean?

[Wild Child]

This is my current mood after reading the lyrics from those who have posted theirs, then looking at mine.

[Lukey]

JustLuke
I Wait For You To Call


What kinda beauty

[UFO]

Originally posted by Keshafied

This is my current mood after reading the lyrics from those who have posted theirs, then looking at mine.

At least you wrote a song and not a poem.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by conatus

Yeah, I feel like it's really hard to truly judge someone's songwriting ability on a verse and a chorus. That's why I'm glad only 15 (?) people are being eliminated.

That's the nature of all auditions sadly

People get a very small chance to showcase their talent and they have to grab it.

[Lukey]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

At least you wrote a song and not a poem.

Britney Jean is basically an album full of poems and look how great that turned out