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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
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Ok, **** everything, I'll post my song.
 Run
VERSE 1
My road began long time ago,
and since then I've been walking
till I find my twin soul
And I've fought some obstacles
And I'll fight what is to come
Even though what I'm doing,
they say is illogical
PRE-CHORUS 1
I'm tired of walking
But I know I can't give up
So I look at my reflection
and say, 'now,
it's time to run'
CHORUS
And I'll run, run, run
'till I reach the end
And I'll run, run, run
even if I lose my breath
and I'll run, run, run
'till I finish what I started
and I'll run, run, run
'till I find my other half
And I don't care about the time I waste,
if I'm searching for you, babe,
I'll do whatever it takes to find you,
to find you, my girl.
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
This is GORGEOUS, well done! And don't ever doubt yourself. This is better than mine. You'll be fine. 
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Do you really think that?
Hopefully the judges think the same.
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Originally posted by conatus
Luke's song actually being at least five times as good as the draft he showed me.  |
What does that mean?
Is that good or bad?
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Quote:
Originally posted by dwuw
Ok, **** everything, I'll post my song.
Run
VERSE 1
My road began long time ago,
and since then I've been walking
till I find my twin soul
And I've fought some obstacles
And I'll fight what is to come
Even though what I'm doing,
they say is illogical
PRE-CHORUS 1
I'm tired of walking
But I know I can't give up
So I look at my reflection
and say, 'now,
it's time to run'
CHORUS
And I'll run, run, run
'till I reach the end
And I'll run, run, run
even if I lose my breath
and I'll run, run, run
'till I finish what I started
and I'll run, run, run
'till I find my other half
And I don't care about the time I waste,
if I'm searching for you, babe,
I'll do whatever it takes to find you,
to find you, my girl.
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**** it, I'm going home! It was nice fighting with y'all.
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Quote:
Originally posted by JustLuke
Do you really think that?
Hopefully the judges think the same.
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Not even a "thank you"?
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Quote:
Originally posted by EuphorianSea
**** it, I'm going home! It was nice fighting with y'all.
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Don't; your song is miles better than mine.
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Not dwuw basically copying Kelly and John's "Run" chorus
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Originally posted by dwuw
Don't; your song is miles better than mine.
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Possibly but sis around 15 people will be going home.
I don't think I'll stay for much longer.
And it's a POEM btw.
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Quote:
Originally posted by JustLuke
What does that mean?
Is that good or bad?
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It means it's good, you stupid bitch!
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I hope who ever wrote Iggy Fantastic and the Snapchat Remix or whatever the **** they're called both have their bags packed. The titles alone <
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Not even a "thank you"?
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Well I was going to say thank you once you said "yes honestly"
But thank you, after Connor dragged my song for filth and threatened me to quit in case I embarrass myself, I was very doubtful.
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Quote:
Originally posted by JustLuke
Well I was going to say thank you once you said "yes honestly"
But thank you, after Connor dragged my song for filth and threatened me to quit in case I embarrass myself, I was very doubtful.
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Ungrateful biatch
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Quote:
Originally posted by JustLuke
Not dwuw basically copying Kelly and John's "Run" chorus
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They're very different tho. And they copied Tokyo Hotel so 
And you waited on the rain,
Their tears my heart is caged,
And we fall through faith,
But we rise and rise again.
And I run, run, run, run, run,
And I run, run, run, run, run,
I run, run, run, run, run,
I just run run run
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Quote:
Originally posted by conatus
I hope who ever wrote Iggy Fantastic and the Snapchat Remix or whatever the **** they're called both have their bags packed. The titles alone <
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Poor Niko and Vespie
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Quote:
Originally posted by conatus
It means it's good, you stupid bitch! |
Oh, that's good then, thank you.
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What are y'all's pet peeves with lyrics? Mine are people using any variant of "That's why I wrote this song" and using a person's name to rhyme with something.
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Poor Niko and Vespie
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WaiT, I saw Niko's song, though? That's Iggy Fantastic? 
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Quote:
Originally posted by conatus
What are y'all's pet peeves with lyrics? Mine are people using any variant of "That's why I wrote this song" and using a person's name to rhyme with something.
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I hate when the song title is repeated several times throughout the chorus, adding no substance and serving no purpose hihi GotSkill
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
I hate when the song title is repeated several times throughout the chorus, adding no substance and serving no purpose hihi GotSkill |
Poor dwuwu
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Originally posted by conatus
WaiT, I saw Niko's song, though? That's Iggy Fantastic? |
I saw it too but he never told me what his song was called and then later I saw him mention Iggy Fantastic in the thread.
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