Negative : I have nothing against basicness. I've written it, listened to it, stanned for it, paid money to download it, bought tickets to see it live etc. But when you submit something this simplistic, in terms of both topic and execution, to a competition about lyrics with 60+ other participants, you need to find a way to spice it up a bit or at least make up for the lack of originality with very accurate meter or some catchy punchlines. I hope you make it to round 2 so that I can see you do one of the aforementioned
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Not groundbreaking but there’s something I find really enjoyable about it, it was hard to read it and not make up a melody.
Me and my basic self but I can dig these reviews thank you!
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but I can dig these reviews thank you! 
