Wow, not for you agreeing with TT's flop review by saying my song doesn't stand out!
IT BEGINS WITH AN I
This meltdown is ironic for 2 reasons :
1) Your review was one of the least strict and harsh of the bunch. Your negative wasn't even that bad
2) If anyone saves you from elimination, it'll be the same person whose review you're trying to drag
1) Your review was one of the least strict and harsh of the bunch. Your negative wasn't even that bad
2) If anyone saves you from elimination, it'll be the same person whose review you're trying to drag
You don't need to simplify your structure. The only thing that kept you away from the 9-10 range was the lines I pointed out. I think I only took 0.1 or 0.2 off for the syllabes and that applies to everyone. It's too early to take off points for meter, but I had to let you know that I noticed something was a little off with it for future reference.
I don't wanna harass you because I know you have a lot to do, but could you explain specifically what it was about the lines you didn't like? Did you feel they didn't make sense, or just not live up to the others I had which you enjoyed? I loved the "ever-changing hues" line because I thought it was a perfect way to describe a relationship. The "who leaves me with two options to choose" line is admittedly worded a little oddly, something like "i'm left with two options to choose" probably would've worked better but that didn't come to me at the time 5-8 of the verse were supposed to expand on the underlying drug theme.
5-8 of the verse were supposed to expand on the underlying drug theme. 
