Some general thoughts or "Hints":
- cosise, short, sweet
- I sense potential for the dramatics side of this game
- I like your colorful essay even if you shaded a fellow contestant
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WHY?!?!?!?!
- I spot a lie in your essay. Love the vibe you had in your essay tho!
- Nice attitude
It worked well here, as you might expect
- Attempting the sympathy route again I see
- I like your last sentence in your essay, could have been a better essay
- decent essay, you sound very optimistic
- Awwww
Playing on emotions here, will my peers buy it?
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(in a humorous way)
- You seem confused
- So pretty
Good application visually
- That Spam tho. Disappointing Essay
- I'm excited to see what you'll post about tbh
- Hate to break it to you, Some people don't love money.
I ended my app with: Who doesn't love money?
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