I don't know you very well as an ATRLer, but this entry just made me realize that you're a very very strong contestant. Other than the basic formatting, it was the best entry I've read so far this season. You just raised the bar (and I hope Umich is taking notes).
I hate when an entry is so good that there's nothing really to say. Because I value good commentary but I'm left speechless. There's nothing to do or correct except give praise.