[UFO]

Staring into the abyss
The clouds so grey, I wish
There were no limits to life
Just a matter of time
'Til we recognise demise
Fading into the skies

Wrote this down yesterday and it's pretty nice.

[swiftie13]

Some really good lyrics

[Gavin.]

I have this potential chorus that I like

And who knew every time you looked into my eyes
It was only me staring back the whole time
Oh how I was caught in your web of lies
About how much you loved my eyes


**** you you stupid piece of ****

[Obsession]

It follows a similar progression to New Order's "Blue Monday" - but it's not the same and I wouldn't call it a sample. This is a song from my perspective of being someone who was deeply in love and am now over it. I can see that the person wasn't a true friend and this is an assurance that I will not let them back in my life.

I Don't Look Back For You
Maybe you thought that I’d wither
I’d be longing to cry on your shoulder
I’ve moved past that
I’m in a better place
If you don’t believe me
Check the smile on my face

But I don’t look back for you
I don’t shed tears on the hole you left
You will never see the bruise
Because I’ve let it heal
And I don’t look back for you

Maybe you thought during winter
I’d wish you were just a bit closer
But I had other friends
And yeah, they saw me through
They showed me just how much I really needed you

But I don’t look back for you
I don’t shed tears on the hole you left
You will never see the bruise
Because I’ve let it heal
And I don’t look back for you

You were a tainted rose
I had to pick out the thorns
Once I let you ruin me
You can’t hurt me now, I’m free

And I don’t look back for you
I don’t shed tears on the hole you left
You will never see the bruise
Because I’ve let it heal
And I don’t look back for you

And I don’t look back for you
I don’t shed tears on the hole you left
You will never see the bruise
Because I’ve let it heal
And I don’t look back for you

I don’t look back for you
I don’t look back for you
I don’t look back for you
I don’t look back for you

[Tymps.]

omg the new Platinum Hit thread just got posted! Sign-ups are already getting close to being closed

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Tymps.

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[Aurora]

Originally posted by Tymps.

omg the new Platinum Hit thread just got posted! Sign-ups are already getting close to being closed

Mess.

[Nait Phoenix]

Recently I haven't been making much original work… but I have been re-writing some lyrics for K-Pop songs in English! It's been fun… my first was "Missing You" by 2NE1…

Missing You

First Verse:
Please don’t look at me with those same eyes
‘Cause they aren’t the ones I recognize
Please don’t talk to me like we are on again
When you don’t even wanna be friends

Pre-Chorus 1:
I don’t want a love that’s gonna drown me out like rain
I don’t know how long I can pretend I’m okay
When you know I’m not okay (When you know it’s too late)

Chorus:
My mind’s screaming at you
Angry that you left me all alone
But my heart’s crying for you
Hoping that you'd never let me go

Hook:
Do you even know?
Do you even know?
How I miss you so?
Do you even know?
Do you even know?

Second Verse:
You can’t tell me this was all in your head
I’d rather you leave and end up dead (You heard what I said)
Put on faces you think are gonna work
But I know I’m not the only one hurt (I know I’ve been there before)

Pre-Chorus 2:
I don’t wanna see us crash and burn into these flames
I don’t know how long I can pretend I’m okay
When you know it’s too late

Chorus:
My mind’s screaming at you
Angry that you left me all alone
But my heart’s crying for you
Hoping that you'd never let me go

Hook:
Do you even know?
Do you even know?
How I miss you so?
Do you even know?
Do you even know?

Third Verse:
Like a fire burning once again
You will fall victim to the wind
And take away with it my sorrow
Now that I am staring at your face
I keep hoping it fades away
And leaves me looking for tomorrow
Because all I have is tomorrow

Reference Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AG0jlKdB1s0

But I believe my best is "News" by 9Muses…

News

Hook 1:
Hey, d’you hear the news?
We are over, oops
I love you like a hole in the head
Paying for the cost
This is all your loss
Ready, I’m ready, I’m ready, Hey!

Verse:
This love was scandalous
Headlines spreading around
With a final kiss, they were gone
We were dangerous
Dirty secrets you tell
It almost made the right feel so wrong

Pre-Chorus:
Wanna read about it?
‘Cause I’m not talkin’ ‘bout it
You already know how I feel
Please don’t bring about it
I wanna live without it
I know that these feelings aren’t real

Chorus:
You know
You’re a creep, you’re a sneak
And I caught you in your cheat
You’re the front page pick of the week
You were wrong all along
Now your shit’s out in this song
Did you think you’d hide it for long?

Hook 2:
Packing in my holster, don’t come any closer
I hate you, you make me insane
Paying for the cost
This is all your loss
Ready, I’m ready, I’m ready, Hey!

Pre-Chorus 2:
You won’t change, I doubt it
And I can’t be about it
You already know what’s the deal
Please don’t bring about it
I wanna live without it
I know that these feelings aren’t real

Chorus:
You know
You’re a creep, you’re a sneak
And I caught you in your cheat
You’re the front page pick of the week
You were wrong all along
Now your shit’s out in this song
Did you think you’d hide it for long?

Rap:
Your fake smile, fake eyes, fake words, they were all lies
Gossip and rumors, you loser, you loser
It’s too much, with you, it’s too much
Hey, give me my great goods
Give me my great goods

Pre-Chorus:
Wanna read about it?
‘Cause I’m not talkin’ ‘bout it
You already know how I feel
Please don’t bring about it
I wanna live without it
I know these feelings aren’t real

Chorus 2:
You know
You’re a creep, you’re a sneak
And you’re caught up in your cheat
You’re the front page pick of the week
Boy, get use to that bruise
Since you’ve read all the reviews
I won’t get caught up in your news

Hook 1:
Hey, d’you hear the news?
This is over, oops
I love you like a hole in the head
Paying for the cost
This is all your loss
Ready, I’m ready, I’m ready, Hey!

Reference Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MC_SKIkZ9PE

[EatmeZayn]

I wrote this recently after my first semester of Senior year; my perspective on the world has changed a lot, so it's kind of about that but also other stuff.

Sublime

[Verse 1]

Pulse goes slow to the beat of the no shows
Spirits so high, hold my breath till my eyes close
This is real and maybe this is all that I know
Flashing lights and pretty lies are my favorite things to overdose on.

This is a dream, but I'll step into the thrill of it
All the people, they gleam, worries cut off like a tourniquet
No one really cares that the things we fear are imminent
False alarms and empty hearts are the very things that let us prolong.

[Chorus]

There's beauty in darkness, but this is how the world spins
Put yourself into the light, or you'll pay for all of your sins
This is how it goes, it's so simple if you fall in
People live with closed eyes, and it's easy just to lose it
If you step out of the light, you'll see that I don't need to prove this.

[Verse 2]

I'll sleep when I'm dead, there's no point and there's no time
Coming up fast, and I fake it so good it's sublime
Begging for youth, these years pass in a day's time
I don’t want to change seasons; I crave an eternal summertime.

This is a life, but we treat it like a tournament
All the innocent bleed, and all the guilty live in silence
But everyone loses, in this world there are no rudiments
In the end, there is an end, and it comes for all of us.

[Chorus]

There's beauty in darkness, but this is how the world spins
Put yourself into the light, or you'll pay for all of your sins
This is how it goes, it's so simple if you fall in
People live with closed eyes, and it's easy just to lose it
If you step out of the light, you'll see that I don't need to prove this.

[Bridge]

My heart beats frantic, breathing shallow
But I keep moving, chasing shadows
No restrictions and nowhere bound.
To be lost in life is to be found.

[Chorus]

There's beauty in darkness, but this is how the world spins
Put yourself into the light, or you'll pay for all of your sins
This is how it goes, it's so simple if you fall in
People live with closed eyes, and it's easy just to lose it
If you step out of the light, you'll see that I don't need to prove this.

[Jack!]

Please check this out, I hope you enjoy. My vocals are rough, but I'd appreciate some feedback on the actual song.




https://soundcloud.com/jackleesmusic/broken-acoustic

[Eros]

Originally posted by Jack!

Please check this out, I hope you enjoy. My vocals are rough, but I'd appreciate some feedback on the actual song.




https://soundcloud.com/jackleesmusic/broken-acoustic

I'm really into the melody you got going for this song, the chorus needs to be pulled back a bit tho. I feel like you're doing too much with it. It also gives me some kind of Ne-yo vibe, which imo isn't a good thing. Other than that its a solid song tbh! I really really enjoyed the verses.

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Jack!

Please check this out, I hope you enjoy. My vocals are rough, but I'd appreciate some feedback on the actual song.




https://soundcloud.com/jackleesmusic/broken-acoustic

This was beautiful. I had a little trouble with your enunciation, but it was so heartfelt and touching. I'd love to see the lyrics to get a better feel for it.

[Jack!]

Originally posted by Eros

I'm really into the melody you got going for this song, the chorus needs to be pulled back a bit tho. I feel like you're doing too much with it. It also gives me some kind of Ne-yo vibe, which imo isn't a good thing. Other than that its a solid song tbh! I really really enjoyed the verses.

Thanks for the feedback! The chorus was written too fast and I think in due time I'll definitely revisit the song and rewrite it. Ne-yo though, I wouldn't have imagined that, haha. But thank you!

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

This was beautiful. I had a little trouble with your enunciation, but it was so heartfelt and touching. I'd love to see the lyrics to get a better feel for it.

Thank you! The lyrics should be in the description on the soundcloud page?

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Jack!

Thanks for the feedback! The chorus was written too fast and I think in due time I'll definitely revisit the song and rewrite it. Ne-yo though, I wouldn't have imagined that, haha. But thank you!



Thank you! The lyrics should be in the description on the soundcloud page?

Oh, I'm on mobile. That why I didn't see them. I'll look later, then.

[Gavin.]

Can any of y'all hoes sing? I need a singer for a song


https://soundcloud.com/gavinoriginal/cold-40


More than happy to send the lyrics to any people who would like to take a shot at it...would prefer a female voice but if you are a guy and think you could pull it off let me know!

[SHICD]

Originally posted by Jack!

Please check this out, I hope you enjoy. My vocals are rough, but I'd appreciate some feedback on the actual song.




https://soundcloud.com/jackleesmusic/broken-acoustic

+: heartfelt, emotionally enthralling, honest sounding.
-: the piano is one dimensional, sometimes I can't understand what you're saying, and the lyrics are generally trite.

Overall, I enjoyed it and it has the bones to potentially be an amazing record. Keep it up

[Jezang Looz]

Finally had some inspiration to finish this song, I could see a pop girl like Selena, Ellie, Ariana etc taking on this track. Generic lyrics but should be accessible enough for top 20 with a good beat

Fire and Brimestones

FIRE AND BRIMSTONES
LYRICS

[Verse 1]
Even if the lights went out
Even if we couldn’t hear a sound
I wouldn’t have a doubt
You here is all I need around

[Verse 2]
What we’re doing is so wrong
You know that this thing we have ain’t love
But you just won’t give it up
And those promises are never enough

[Chorus] x2
Cause all I see
With you are fire and brimstones baby
Cause all I see
With you are fire and brimstones baby

[Verse 3]
The future is unclear
My heart stops whenever you are near
I can’t help but to feel
I’m losing everything that made me real

[Bridge]
Because tonight
You’re all I need to make me feel alive
Give it time
And take me across the borderline

[Chorus] x2

[Bridge]

[Chorus] x2

[DancingShoes]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

Finally had some inspiration to finish this song, I could see a pop girl like Selena, Ellie, Ariana etc taking on this track. Generic lyrics but should be accessible enough for top 20 with a good beat

Fire and Brimestones

FIRE AND BRIMSTONES
LYRICS

[Verse 1]
Even if the lights went out
Even if we couldn’t hear a sound
I wouldn’t have a doubt
You here is all I need around

[Verse 2]
What we’re doing is so wrong
You know that this thing we have ain’t love
But you just won’t give it up
And those promises are never enough

[Chorus] x2
Cause all I see
With you are fire and brimstones baby
Cause all I see
With you are fire and brimstones baby

[Verse 3]
The future is unclear
My heart stops whenever you are near
I can’t help but to feel
I’m losing everything that made me real

[Bridge]
Because tonight
You’re all I need to make me feel alive
Give it time
And take me across the borderline

[Chorus] x2

[Bridge]

[Chorus] x2

I could definitely see a pop girl singing this especially over an EDM track!

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by DancingShoes

I could definitely see a pop girl singing this especially over an EDM track!

Yupp that was my intention! It was kind of inspired by I Want You To Know but oh well I mean they all copy/rehash the same formula so I don't see why I can't too. Eventually I'll become more original when I develop my own sound but for now if it ain't broken!

[Buyonce1814]

A poem I wrote about my grandma. It was th anniversary of her death last night so I wrote this. I'm not a fan of it as I find it cheesy but ehh.