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Tournament: ATRL's Platinum Hit | Season 2 | Episode 9: New Assignment!
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Thank you Kavish! 
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This wait is driving me insane.
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I guess we'll be waiting until Friday/Saturday to get the results to get back to normalcy...?  J/K I know you're busy ImARudeBoy!
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Member Since: 11/16/2011
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Everything is coming right now. Had no internet connection the last few days. Sorry for the inconveniences lately.
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Hugamari:
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This song made me feel happy and made me think about my friendships, I love that the chorus is quite long but you can tell it'd be really melodic and beautiful. Good work!
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The thing about you I like most, is that whatever emotion you are trying to convey is so bold within the lyrics, it's literally amazing. Amazing ****ing job.
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Nait Phoenix:
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I didn't enjoy this, I think with an uplifting song there's a very fine line between cheesy and cute/relatable. Unfortunately this falls more into cheesy than cute/relatable. I'm also not reaallly pleased that you used a song you'd already written, everyone else has written their song this week, but I didn't lower your score because of it as there is no rule against what you did.
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It was a solid attempt. While I loved it in a weird way, it wasn't something that I would necessarily listen to to make me happy. In the end the lyrics weren't half bad, but had room for improvement. And, I feel indifferent that you used a song you had already written, but in the future, it would be more fair if you actually wrote your song, but I didn't penalize you.
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Midnight:
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Midnight!! You are seriously the dark horse of this competition, your chorus literally killed me and I loved the "rush of august" ugh you are amazing! Keep up the amazing dark wordplay and I think you will win!
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15/10. There is no critiquing to this. I loved every line. 
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Kavish:
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I like these alot, I still don't think you're at the level you could be considering past entries, but it's better. It reminds me a lot of Flyleaf's Fully Alive which kind of has a similar message, this is no bad thing as I love the song, nice job.
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I think you are better at writing more melancholy and more moving songs rather than happy and upbeat. In the long run, I wasn't really a fan this week. 
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AdamAL4:
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These are good, I like that when reading it you can tell it'd be a hooky song. I like the chorus and love the usage of the word jubilee, I just think you should have linked the verses to why someone is celebrating a jubilee, because it is a tiny bit confusing. "A special anniversary of an event, esp. one celebrating twenty-five or fifty years of a reign or activity."
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Kind of all over the place theme-wise. I didn't really know what to think about the whole song. The verses and chorus belong in two separate songs in my opinion. Still a good job. 
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DripDrip:
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Although there is no chorus, (I think, am I wrong!?) this is my favourite entry this week. I can't explain why, but I feel like this song would be just a continuous hook-fest, and I love the empowerment theme of sexuality without being ****ty. Great job.
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
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Oop at me being eliminated twice in three rounds
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Member Since: 3/27/2012
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Wait, my song inspired by stripping did actually good, I AM SHOCKED.
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Although there is no chorus, (I think, am I wrong!?) this is my favourite entry this week. I can't explain why, but I feel like this song would be just a continuous hook-fest, and I love the empowerment theme of sexuality without being ****ty. Great job.
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It has a chorus, funnellegs but I sent it from my fun since I got a random burst of creativity. Thank you though
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Should I eliminate you just to put you out of your misery? You seem pretty miserable here.
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Sorry, IARB, I figured the gif would be a hint I'm not serious. Probably should've said nothing tho.
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Member Since: 3/27/2012
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I'm shocked I'm still here
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Podium:
Midnight: 20/20
funnellegs -10
ImARudeBoy - 10
DripDrip: 19.5/20
funnellegs- 10/10
ImARudeBoy - 9.5/10
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Hugamari: 17/20
funnellegs- 8/10
ImARudeBoy - 9/10
!!Congrats!!
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Wait, I really got second place
This is a first, rising from the bottom, rise lotus, rise.
Stripping gets me so far
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Yas @ drip doing better than me.  Great job! 
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Wait, I really got second place
This is a first, rising from the bottom, rise lotus, rise.
Stripping gets me so far
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DripDrip we're all tired of the smiley, you use it in every post even if it doesn't fit in context 
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Welp, that's fine! I never was the happy type...
Good luck to the rest! 
See y'all!!! 
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BTW, I didn't misunderstand the challenge, if that comes into question.
I really did write a song for the challenge, but reading it, it just didn't seem "happy" enough! And when you said "no party songs", that immediately knocked out my best contender for happy songs. I wrote this amazing song a week ago, and in it was one line that made it sound like a "party song", so I felt I couldn't use it. So, with two songs out, I really had no other choice but to dig up some of my older material and send it.
And one song, I plan to use for my "album" because it's, by far, one of my best songs, but if I released it prematurely, I'd never forgive myself. So, I'm glad I'm leaving... leaves me more time to focus on what I wanted to do since I was eighteen. Truthfully, when you hear the song I would've sent, you'll see why I didn't.
Again, thanks for the second season, I probably won't do this next time. But, it was fun. Bye!
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
BTW, I didn't misunderstand the challenge, if that comes into question.
I really did write a song for the challenge, but reading it, it just didn't seem "happy" enough! And when you said "no party songs", that immediately knocked out my best contender for happy songs. I wrote this amazing song a week ago, and in it was one line that made it sound like a "party song", so I felt I couldn't use it. So, with two songs out, I really had no other choice but to dig up some of my older material and send it.
And one song, I plan to use for my "album" because it's, by far, one of my best songs, but if I released it prematurely, I'd never forgive myself. So, I'm glad I'm leaving... leaves me more time to focus on what I wanted to do since I was eighteen. Truthfully, when you hear the song I would've sent, you'll see why I didn't.
Again, thanks for the second season, I probably won't do this next time. But, it was fun. Bye! |
...But who said you're leaving?
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Member Since: 3/27/2012
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DripDrip we're all tired of the smiley, you use it in every post even if it doesn't fit in context |
How rude
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jk. 
Great lyrics. Felt like a big fiesta.