My hints, in no particular order:
1. Were you high when you wrote this?
2. Show, don't tell.
3. This isn't enough to make me interested in you.
4. Solid entry.
5. Boring and drawn out.
6. So cute.
7. You seem unsure of yourself.
8. Wonderful work.
9. Superfluous.
10. Oh lordy.
11. It's nice, but it's not much beyond that.
12. Interesting without being gimmicky.
13. The second paragraph is such a let down.
14. This entry left me curious (and not in a good way).
