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Discussion: ATRL Songwriter's Thread | Jacktrus gain dual #1
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Is this about song-writing in general or ?
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Member Since: 9/9/2012
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Originally posted by mannybillionz
Is this about song-writing in general or ?
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Basically, but there is also Singing/Rapping, Producing, etc threads if you are into other parts with making music.
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Member Since: 9/9/2012
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Omg I wrote this song October 27, 2012 it's called "Lose It & Get Some". I really love it, I wrote it over the "Die Young" tune. I'm surprised because most songs I write and look back on are so horrible to me. 
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Member Since: 3/14/2013
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Originally posted by Hugamari
We found Rihanna's ATRL account and she agreed to judge. |
noooooooooo 
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Originally posted by AdamAL4
Nait's played this game before and we did the same thing with sign ups here before we started the game. Speaking of previous players, the third judge is one  |
Sis, I've been looking into these thread's pages  . I know that you did some pre-sign up thing. I was always afraid to post lyrics here tho, because I think that they are not good.
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
It's probably Regina George. Every game needs a bitchy judge. And then an even bitchier judge for the bitchy judge to not feel so mean...  |
Clock ha 
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Originally posted by Hugamari
ALTWOO is quite the cute nickname.
ALT WOO
Say it with me
Alt woo!
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The damn memories.
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Member Since: 8/17/2013
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Song writer thread let me start posting here 
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Member Since: 8/17/2013
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Originally posted by Hugamari
We found Rihanna's ATRL account and she agreed to judge. |
Y'all know she has a account here though.
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Member Since: 6/20/2012
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Here are some songs i wrote during my camping trip last weekend 
 Touch Me?
t-t-t-t-touch me touch me baby feel my skin, it's seductive it'll reel you in. touch me touch me forgive me of my sins, the ones ill commit tonight while we're touching. Face like a good girl but body of a bad one, baby if you follow me you'll be bagging 2 for 1. My worlds a bit messy rough around the edges but trust me baby boy I can get you to heaven.
*Chorus
So touch me touch me make me come alive, unleash my inner demons just for the night. You want some whips you want some chains a whole little show. Baby just touch me ill show you a freakshow ow ow ill show you a freakshow ow ow. So Baby Just touch me and I'll burn up your world
Beautiful Sniper
Loves meant to be a beautiful thing, but baby for you it's about to get messy. You thought you could just leave no consequence at all, you thought I'd be another girl that you left to fall. Sorry to say this is something new, but baby you broke my heart, now I'm after you
*Chorus
I'm a beautiful sniper, baby don't run. I'm gonna hunt you down, lock and loaded you're done. This ain't Cupid arrows those were a waste, now it's time for some tough lovin comin your way. Sniper sniper I'm a beautiful sniper, sniper baby say your prayers, you're my hearts current target and you won't fare. Beautiful sniper sniper sniper, locked loaded, aim and target, SHOOT.
There's a reward for you, but its not money, it's the sweet feeling of getting you and making you feel sorry. On your knees how the roles have changed, your head looks perfect in my aim. I promise ill be gentle unlike you, wont let you waste tears on the pain imma give you
*Chorus
Got any final words for me, like I love you or a desperate plea? I'll blow you some kisses, bullets in fact, tell me if your heart can handle that. That's how it feels to be left for dead, no not me but my heart instead. Gather your wishes and say your prayers, this beautiful sniper is Lock and loaded and has you in her stare
*Chorus
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Member Since: 3/15/2013
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I wrote this probably my most crazy lyrics that I ever wrote
"Just Sleeping There"
It's the morning I see the fence
It's been the night, I've been telling you
I don't mind if you looking for someone else
After all these days,
The flashlight has been down
You return back my shades in the middle of the night
Well baby, I could not see
You're not the one for me
But your image is in my mind
I cannot delete now
What would I do you be here?
Maybe I'm turn out shaking
So I put my hands up
And lying over there
I wanna touch you, hold you, kiss you right now
But I can't because you're not with me now
I wanna tell you how much I care but that wasn't enough
So I back off, give you a little space
See you in that jacket that I bought for your birthday
You still wearing that,
It's the boring office day,
The coffee turns cold, I'm bored too long
I don't mind if you coming back to me now
After all these night,
Under the blanket that so light
You cuddle me up and I feel so safe and warm in your arms
Well baby, you're far from me
I bake your favorite cookies
I wanna give it to you
But I decide to throw it away
Well baby, I've been crying
I waste all the tissues
I'm not care about myself
As long you're not with me
I wanna touch you, hold you, kiss you right now
But I can't because you're not with me now
I wanna tell you how much I care but that wasn't enough
So I back off, give you a little space
See you in that jacket that I bought for your birthday
You still wearing that,
I've been travel by the train
Waste my dollar seeing you
And I realize you're not for me
I'm fine with that
I'm knocking your door
Hope you happy to see me
You face look so confused
With baby on your knees
I wonder who is that?
Maybe that is a fact
I wonder know how you've been
But turn out who is been
So I've been asking you
Do you want to take me back
You shaking your head
I've been left heartbroken
Well baby, fifty dollar to get out of here?
Can you give me money, I don't have that
Sitting under bus stop, waiting for a day to come
I'm so cold, I'm laying around and just sleeping there
Just sleeping there
Just sleeping there
Just sleeping there
thoughts?
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I love it 
it gives me country tea's tbh
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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bump, any songwriters here?
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Originally posted by Eglė
bump, any songwriters here?
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No, we're all in the Platinum Hit game...
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Member Since: 5/12/2012
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Started this hook, for a Mid Tempo song titled "I'd Rather Be With You"
Can someone help me with the verses. This isn't for Platinum Hit.
[Chorus]
Forget the other girls
(They don't hold a candle to you)
Forget the other girls
(They don't grab me like you do)
And to tell you the truth
I'd rather be with you
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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This iconic thread never dies. 
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Originally posted by CallMyName
Started this hook, for a Mid Tempo song titled "I'd Rather Be With You"
Can someone help me with the verses. This isn't for Platinum Hit.
[Chorus]
Forget the other girls
(They don't hold a candle to you)
Forget the other girls
(They don't grab me like you do)
And to tell you the truth
I'd rather be with you
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You don't have to know me
(You don't have to know me)
But I wanna get to know you
(Wanna know you...)
Looking like you're lonely
(Looking like you're lonely)
Tell me what I gotta do
To get inside your head, inside your heart
Tell me where to go, tell me where to start
Wanna let nature lead the way
Listen to what I gotta say...
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Part of why I was vying for a spot as a judge or host of Platinum Hit this "season" was because I am at my worst in the Fall, but here's what I came up with... 
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Member Since: 8/28/2012
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I wrote something new the other day which I really love so thought I'd share.
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WHEN I WAS LITTLE
Seconds pass, my skin sheds
I watch my youth fade into the sunset
Yesterday is long now
My innocence is nowhere to be found
I lay in bed, I toss and turn
They say life's a lesson that you learn
But the more I know, the less I love
About this world I used to dream of
Chorus:
Sometimes I wish I could be a little kid again
Running barefeet as fast as I can
To the Christmas tree, I'd wake mum and dad, open the presents so fast
Oh the world was so different, back when I was little
I close my eyes, I start to think
Of a time when I loved everything
Fairytales, kings and queens
Dressing up on Halloween
But it goes by oh so fast
Sooner or later you outgrow your mask
And you got bills, a house to run
And you forget what it's like to be young
Chorus
*Instrumental*
Final chorus:
Sometimes I wish I could be a little kid again
Running wild and free, I could anything I wanted to be
Didn't have to worry at all, life was simple back then, I wanna go there again
Cause the world was so much better, back when I was little
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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I write music and currently working on my vocal chords~
 been writing since 2nd grade.
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/1/2012
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Originally posted by DevonRoars
I write music and currently working on my vocal chords~
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Show us!
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Member Since: 6/10/2011
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I want to share my lyrics but i don't want people to steal my work - not you guys just people who lurk.
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