[DR3ch]

Originally posted by Jaymz

Girls remember.... not all songs have lyrics that rhyme... it's not always needed

We know that

This is one part of the chorus from "Your Lost"

"I hope you're gonna cry this time, I walked out of this door
Your broke my Heart with your Lies, I hope you finally recognize that this is Your Loss"

What do you guys think

[Hugamari]

I typically rhyme in mine because a lot of the things I write are supposed to be dance pop. The lyrics are more to add to the catchiness of the song than to add depth and meaning to it. I like to have SOME lyrical value in it, though. It probably ends up making it sound like lyrical cheese, but whatever. Pre-teen gurls would bop.

[AnotherGagaFan]

Originally posted by DR3ch

We know that

This is one part of the chorus from "Your Lost"

"I hope you're gonna cry this time, I walked out of this door
Your broke my Heart with your Lies, I hope you finally recognize that this is Your Lost"

What do you guys think

I think you mean to say this is "your loss"

Not criticizing! Just wanna help

[EatmeZayn]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I typically rhyme in mine because a lot of the things I write are supposed to be dance pop. The lyrics are more to add to the catchiness of the song than to add depth and meaning to it. I like to have SOME lyrical value in it, though. It probably ends up making it sound like lyrical cheese, but whatever. Pre-teen gurls would bop.

THIS! I can't imagine myself writing anything besides pop and slow songs. I can also write rap a-la Ke$ha's verses or Rih's raps, but I'm most comfortable with pop.

[Jaymz]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Ke$ha's flaw-free "Run Devil Run" doesn't rhyme in the verses.

I will never forgive her for giving that song away

[Jaymz]

Originally posted by DR3ch

We know that

This is one part of the chorus from "Your Lost"

"I hope you're gonna cry this time, I walked out of this door
Your broke my Heart with your Lies, I hope you finally recognize that this is Your Lost"

What do you guys think

I said it because some of the songs in here seem to have some lines in them just to make the lines rhyme... and it should be your loss not lost

[swiftie13]

I write plenty.. sometimes about one topic generate about 20 songs XD other times I go outside the box and write other stuff.. but yes I do write a lot of songs ever since I was like 12

[UpAllNight]

Yes!

[tj hazuki]

Man i was looking of some of my songs, but can't find them..

[DR3ch]

Originally posted by Jaymz

I said it because some of the songs in here seem to have some lines in them just to make the lines rhyme... and it should be your loss not lost

oh okay thank you

[Jaymz]

I may post a bit of something I've written in a bit

[Hugamari]

Gurl you best