1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on.
19. Wow. Flawless.
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours?
Going through the entries now...and I feel that two or three people have really separated themselves from the pack so far, while at least one person had a disappointing entry. And one person made a statement so bold and so brash that there was no way that they could back it up with their previous posts...and I was right.
Please tell I'm not the only one to quickly review their entry for "bold statements".
Alright, my rankings have been sent in. Matty, I apologize in advance, for I had a LOT to say.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Please tell I'm not the only one to quickly review their entry for "bold statements".
A lot of people made "bold statements". It's just that one person made a particularly bold statement that was proven to be a falsity after further review.
1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on. 19. Wow. Flawless.
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours?
Since you guys are craving hints, here's some from me:
1) You're just confident enough that you're not too confident. Be careful, though, because you are this close to being cocky.
2) Bitches come and go on ATRL. All you showed me is that you're just another bitch in a sea of them.
3) Were you in a hurry? Why make such a short entry?
4) You make some interesting points, but it seems as if you're taking and reusing lessons from ANTM 101.
5) Tons of confidence, but it's a good thing, in your case. Impressive.
6) Not sure why you had to include an agenda at the end of your entry, because it was solid otherwise. (This could go for multiple people.)
7) I was disappointed by your entry. Very disappointed. I was expecting more.
8) Not enough content, not enough meat, not enough effort.
9) Congratulations, you're a drama queen. So is most of ATRL. What else can you bring to the table?
10) Your honesty was refreshing, and your willingness to learn is going to be a major asset if you make it to the final 14.
11) Yours was the kind of statement that I would have made if I was in your shoes. Lovely.
12) You are the definition of what ATRL is right now. In this case, that's a compliment.
13) I'm just not sure if you have it in you to be a top dog on ATRL. Prove me wrong.
14) Two words: Finish strong. You had a strong entry until the very end.
15) Saying that you are something and then actually being something are two very different things. Once you say that you are something, you have to prove it.
16) I feel that you have the ability to be a trendsetter and a dark horse to win this competition.
17) Loved the refreshingly honest take on the state of ATRL. And I feel that your traits are the kind of traits that stand the test of time here.
18) My problem with your entry is that you didn't tell me enough. What are your intentions? What REALLY makes you a top member? I didn't get any of that from you.
19) You are exactly the kind of person that I am looking for. It's always nice to see someone who is being themselves and not being an amplified version of themselves.