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Originally posted by Temporal
2. MattyTacos - Storm Warning
Daddy Hunter Hayes should sue u tbh. This felt like a demo tbh. You had plenty of words left to throw in a bridge or add on to the verses to make this feel more complete.
- The chorus was pretty weak, saying “I wish I could be the rain / Or an oncoming hurricane” and then jumping to “I’m your storm warning” was…off.
- “You said beauty is deceived under lights” poor use of “deceived”
- “So yours was the brightest to watchful eyes” non mi piace the use of “watchful”
I mean this wasn’t as awful as I would’ve expected (  ), but this entry was kinda meddling. Put more effort into it, fat. |
Mess, I forgot about that song
One of his best
I pretty much wrote the song in less than 20 mins just to make it through this round
I'll take more time on my entries in the future weeks tho, thanks
Shame because Run Away With Me is genuinely GOAT but it's suck on a MEDIOCRE album 
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