[Dylobs]

I disagree with everything you said Temporal. I'm just not pretentious. I am authentically minimalistic in my style. It seems this competition doesn't appreciate minimalism. Next time, I'll just use nonsensical lyrics and rhymes. It seems that's what you like.

Thanks for your time.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Dylobs

I disagree with everything you said Temporal. I'm just not pretentious. I am authentically minimalistic in my style. It seems this competition doesn't appreciate minimalism. Next time, I'll just use nonsensical lyrics and rhymes. It seems that's what you like.

Thanks for your time.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by conatus

finally @ you showing taste

Sis, I've been showing taste for a while now

I'm looking at the big sky
I'm looking at the big sky now
I'm looking at the big sky
You never understood me
You never really tried

[Pecinta Mariah]

Originally posted by Temporal

She says "chickens" tho

What a flop ass stan I am

But I really like "write rare words like mariah's elusive" line too.


Anyway, did pears forget to include my song title?

[Gladion]

Thank you temp!!!

I'm happy you liked the concept, it is a bit of a mess execution wise, I wrote the song thinking I was way under 140 words and then when I was getting ready to submit it has 165 when i changed lots of the lines it was really messy and it was really obvious. Happy you found it decent <3

Also i totally forgot about sorry/Ferrari. a mess.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah

What a flop ass stan I am

But I really like "write rare words like mariah's elusive" line too.


Anyway, did pears forget to include my song title?

o no dat was my b

[Dylobs]

No but seriously I genuinely toned down my vocabulary a lot in this song so I'm shocked that you thought I was trying to serve Moo, MIAMTEC era.

But I can understand the rest of the criticisms. I can't tell tho where I stand with you tho.

Was it good bad mediocre superb average? In relation to what you've marked so far.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Dylobs

I disagree with everything you said Temporal. I'm just not pretentious. I am authentically minimalistic in my style. It seems this competition doesn't appreciate minimalism. Next time, I'll just use nonsensical lyrics and rhymes. It seems that's what you like.

Thanks for your time.

Bey Admired, ha impact (yes, I've been educated!)

[Temporal]

ugh 9 more to go

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Dylobs

No but seriously I genuinely toned down my vocabulary a lot in this song so I'm shocked that you thought I was trying to serve Moo, MIAMTEC era.

But I can understand the rest of the criticisms. I can't tell tho where I stand with you tho.

Was it good bad mediocre superb average? In relation to what you've marked so far.

Slightly above average from all the entries so far, slightly below average from your batch thus far.

[Citrus]

Originally posted by Temporal

ugh 9 more to go

I'll grade them

[Gladion]

Originally posted by Temporal

Niko what was your title

I know it doesn't matter now, but it's called Only In My Sleep

[OnikaSlays]

I thought I was gonna get dragged tbh

I'm glad you liked it

[minho]

oh whoops I deleted the post where I put my song in and I think that may have messed some things up

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Temporal

ugh 9 more to go

How many more till mine

[Temporal]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

How many more till mine

4

[Gladion]

I always debut pretty low every season. I just wanna be safe, maybe a nice #25 ish range would be cute.

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by Temporal

Slightly above average from all the entries so far, slightly below average from your batch thus far.

Just like with most things in my life, I'm indubitably satisfied with remaining ever so slightly above the rest of my skilled competitors.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Temporal

4

I hope as a fellow shawn fan you'll give me a 2 point booster, thx

[Temporal]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

I hope as a fellow shawn fan you'll give me a 2 point booster, thx

Guess I should penalize Conatus from incorrectly characterizing Shawn as "ugly" on my wall then, shouldn't I?