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Originally posted by ceremonials
What are yalls favorite couplets that you've written?
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the song that eliminated me in PH8 has a good chorus imo:
Touch
This ain’t love, I just like your touch
So why’s my heart keep ****ing it up?
Just wanna know your skin, not feel your soul
So why’s my mind spinning out of control?
also this critically acclaimed line from the title track challenge where I did Beauty Behind The Madness:
BBTM
But when our nocturnal skin knows daytime’s sin
It burns in disarray
my sig mostly has my other favorite lines, except I'm still really proud of Enchanted Heartbeat from last season as a whole and I'm gonna post it cause I like showing off
Enchanted Heartbeat
V1
Packed ballroom noises, ongoing voices
For me, a scene all too familiar
People with glass eyes, their words a lullaby
For me, a neverending winter
Prince across the room, I’m staring right at you
Waiting for light through the dark
Eyes meet and sparks fly, love that never dies
Happy ending for my cursed heart
PRE
Ooh, run away into the night
Leave em behind, you know I’m right
I’m a poison apple, take a bite
I’ll show you what it’s like to feel alive
CHORUS
Come into my kingdom, take a look around
Play your cards right and king, you’ll be crowned
Lay still for a moment, listen to the sound
Of my enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
Enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
V2
Dreamlike desire, wedding attire
Unwavering, I love you truly
Honeymoon kisses, granting our wishes
Hot nights lit by the moonbeams
Time travels on by, passion left behind
Tolerance every day growing thinner
We’re people with glass eyes, our words a lullaby
My life a neverending winter
PRE
Ooh, I still want to love you babe
I’m not looking for an escape
Our hearts might not make perfect shapes
But that don’t mean we can’t be great
CHORUS
Come back to my kingdom, I want you around
Return to my castle and take back your crown
Lay still for a moment, listen to the sound
Of my enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
Enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
M8
The glass slipper didn’t fit, but we wouldn’t quit
True love’s kiss failed to wake me
My beauty became a beast, his roaring obscene
The big bad wolf is ready to eat
Yeah, sometimes, it looks like our ending’s bad
Sometimes all I want is my free life back
But you still make my enchanted heart beat
You still make my enchanted heart beat, beat, oh
CHORUS
Never leave my kingdom, I want you around
Never leave this castle, pick up your crown
Lay still for a moment, listen to the sound
Of my enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
Never leave my kingdom, I want you around
Never leave this castle, pick up your crown
Lay still for a moment, listen to the sound
Of my enchanted heartbeat, beating for you
Enchanted heartbeat, beating for you