Quote:
Originally posted by Jackson
Open my eyes
And see you slipping to a dark demise
Our world is melting as the waters rise
And now I know, now I know
Is it too late?
Are we subject to the devil’s fate?
As I watch our passion turn to hate
As tensions grow, now I know
Falling six feet under, we’re losing light
Too late to be saved, too dumb to realize
Falling six feet under, we’re losing light
Too late to be saved, too dumb to realize
Cause I don’t think we’ll make it out alive
We’re bleeding out and just one will survive
So die with me
Lie by me
I keep wishing on a fading star
We’ll remember how we felt right from the start
So die with me
Lie by me
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I love the first two lines. But the third one is a step down, melting is an awkward word and is poorly used in it. The second half of the first verse is the best part. The pre-chorus is the best part not the verse. The chorus is easily the weakest. The die by me/lie by me is quite awkward and isn't very good. 3/10
You will not shade Out Alive. I doubt yours will ever touch the perfection that is Kesha's
