This is super off topic but I wanted to write a song called Silica, and the concept was that someone ate silica gel on purpose, but I just found out it's actually effectively harmless except that it makes your mouth totally dried out! There goes that concept!
ff really? I always thought I would like die if I even touched it for so long.
I've always thought a sequel IS expanding on the original story though. If you have a brand new story that's not a sequel that's just a new thing. I thought we were supposed to add dimension to the original song.
I've always thought a sequel IS expanding on the original story though. If you have a brand new story that's not a sequel that's just a new thing. I thought we were supposed to add dimension to the original song.
Exactly, but I don't think you did that
Train was: "Look at the LA lifestyle, it's so dangerous/bad, people/I need to stop"
Wolf Lady felt like the same thing.
The way the judges feel reading our sequel songs is the way that I feel reading the Harry Potter and the Cursed Child sequel.
Disappointment, annoyance, and disgust.
There wasn't really any "I need to stop" dimension in the original song, that's what I was trying to add to the song with Wolf Lady.
I'm confused now, lol.
Quote:
Can’t stop, won’t stop
Running marquee
Don’t let me off
I’ll ride the train for free
In both songs there was this battle of stopping or not stopping. I think you should've done something like make the decision for her, like your song (for example) should've been written about what happened AFTER she decided to not stop.
The way the judges feel reading our sequel songs is the way that I feel reading the Harry Potter and the Cursec Child sequel.
Disappointment, annoyance, and disgust.
You ****ing bitch, I can't believe you— wait, what?! That review actually was not as bad as I thought it was going to be… oh, thank goodness, I can feel less aggressive…
but thanks for the support. 
