[Dylobs]

Well then I'll have to get up at 8am

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by ceremonials

**** my life ill be at work

How fúcked will I be if I can't sign up til later? I might still be able to take my break at 5 tho

Knowing Temporal, it'll probably be like Pokémon types and you'll end up with Steel or something if you wait too long.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by ceremonials

Also will results have two parts then, one score for this round and than our averaged scores from R1+2? Or do we only get one

Yeah, you'll get:

- R2 Ranking
- R1 and R2 Leaderboard (the bottom 5 get eliminated)
- Platinum Chart (your current chart run)

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Moonchild

Knowing Temporal, it'll probably be like Pokémon types and you'll end up with Steel or something if you wait too long.

Probably. A sadist tea.

But not as sadistic as Sam last year w that jigsaw challenge

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Moonchild

Knowing Temporal, it'll probably be like Pokémon types and you'll end up with Steel or something if you wait too long.

You're all writing songs about either Kyogre, the greatest Pokémon ever, or Feebas. That's what you're signing up for!

[Hugamari]

Well I'm taking Feebas because I stan for talent.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Well I'm taking Feebas because I stan for talent.

*Adds to ignore list*

Wow at me finishing all the tables and junk already, the efficencé!

[Dylobs]

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Dylobs

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Dylobs

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Dylobs

http://i.imgur.com/POQ0vrR.png

Is this why he ended up winning S6?

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Finished everything for tomorrow, phew! See y'all then!

[Gladion]

My # of Posts per season

S7 - 1102
S8 - 455
S9 - 158

the decline. This season will probably beat S8 tbh

[minho]

Well, Thanks for the review

[Vulnicura]

in my defence, I didn't realise Temporal sent the entire PM to the judges and not just the song or entry. but I won't apologise for saying my entry was **** cos it IS **** and everyone can see it.

thanks temp and 8th!

[ausdaniel]

got absolutely trashed by 8th, Jackson was half half, Swiftie didn't like, Temporal liked. Hmm this isn't going well.

[CountryBritney]

Okay so those reviews were considerably less positive.

Thank you though. I'll try and work on everything you pointed out

[Dylobs]

Hope to holy hell that there's no elimination or else I'm in a bad position

[UFO]

"like fire in a cage" didn't feel appropriate because when is fire ever caged? Fire and cages just don't seem related.

dd I agree with everything you said but I feel like the point of this metaphor is that fire can't be caged

+ the cage is metaphorical since fire will escape and burn everything in its path



I do get what you're saying though. It's not an image you come across in every day life fff

Thanks for understanding the message!

[UFO]

UFO –
I do enjoy the effect of how combining the two voices literally represents their union, which is a nice take on the challenge.
There are some moments where how you chose to divide lines affected reading, but you were consistent by following up with a similar division in the next stanza, so I assume that was for effect.
I think you took the advice on how to present your songs to heart, so good on you for that. You haven’t quite hit a way to illustrate your themes in a way that’s emotionally resonant, but I feel as if you’re someone who consistently picks up steam throughout the season. Try explaining your characters’ emotions more vividly for the next round.

Whew thank you!

I'll definitely take this into account. Emotion is something that I highly prioritise in song lyrics. Tbh how I divide lines was something I never considered so I'm glad you brought that up