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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
Omg yes that's the worst part about our laundry room is always ****ing full and like I really don't feel like dealing with people 😩 And the floor is always like wet and there's just random pieces of clothing and socks everywhere who really has the time cause I don't
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And when people don't come and collect their **** even when it's been sitting in the machine for about an hour <<<
People who jump the queue <<<
People who stand in your way and won't move when you're clearly trying to take your washing out the machine <<<
It does kind of feel a bit like an answer song or sequel to Mother, because this is from the perspective of Earth itself (herself?) That aside, it’s still a lovely entry. Your flow is so effortless and nothing feels forced, it’s a great quality to have. You’ve used some interesting words and the song in general is executed very well. It’s such a unique way to approach freedom but it works so well. “As I dance around my sun” is just one of many fantastic lyrics that really impressed me. There was an extra “I” in the bridge but that’s not going to make you lose any marks. If anything, the only “negative” would be the similarity to swiftie13’s song, but your approach is quite different (from the perspective of Earth rather than a human leaving it, and it’s a positive representation, not a negative one), so I’m not going to take anything off for that either.
I was indeed inspired by "Mother", as well as a song of my own from long ago called "Gaia's Fate" that was much darker and described mother Earth destroying mankind. I thought it would be nice to write the aftermath.
Is there anything you would like to see improved or anything I need to work on?
Probably my best review yet 
I feel a bit bad being so forceful for comments.