[ceremonials]

Originally posted by GotSkill

Yeah, it's just something I want to see you try, not a permanent change. I think you could get something good out of it. It's kinda hard to find the balance between imagery, poeticism, flow, and emotion, but I only give 10's to songs that have all 4 of those things down perfectly (dont worry about being perfect yet though)



I get that the moon is kinda your "thing", and I respect that and like that you have a symbol you hold on so tightly too, just don't overuse or abuse it

Welp, hopefully I last til next round so I can take your advice

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Element

1. ausdaniel
2. Element

I'm going to flop again

Looking at page 1 when I see this

(he's currently #2 overall)

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Dylobs

So this is basically the order, based on your comments

Yes. I wouldn't be too worried about whether I was a 6 or 7 though. Most of you were very close in score apart from the top and bottom 5 or so

[Skywalker]

So close to being done but my comments are starting to get lazy. Better take a break and get back on it before I sound like tired trash.

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by GotSkill

Yes. I wouldn't be too worried about whether I was a 6 or 7 though. Most of you were very close in score apart from the top and bottom 5 or so

@ all of this. I swear if I barely scrape into the next round again

[swiftie13]

Just finished Delirium I'm so slayed. I'm off to bed unless more comments are coming soon

[Moonchild]

Delirium is a good album.

Everyone worried about your song, know that each judge is only 1/4 of the final result. And even if the worst happens and you are eliminated, know that you've beaten out 45 other people who signed up to get this far. You've hopefully learned about your skills and songwriting, and that's more than enough to be proud of.

[Moonchild]

I don't care what y'all say, "Holding On For Life" slays me.

[ceremonials]

My album is almost finished. I just need to finish producing a couple of songs, mainly the PH ones that weren't originally on the album

Yall better buy it

Also, do you like the title or should I be something else?

Strange Frequencies

1. Out of the Light
2. Prayers and Proclamation
3. Parasomnia
4. Lucid Dream
5. Dreamcatcher
6. Power Trip
7. God Complex
8. Strange Frequencies (interlude)
9 Ceremonials
10 The Flood
12 Anchor
13 Empty Planet
14 False Prophet
15. Testament
16. Saints
17. Sacrifice
18. Revelations (interlude)
19. No Light

Common themes include water, religion and dreams. So your typical Florence album

[Skywalker]

eek at my boyfriend waking up and asking why I'm not in bed on our anniversary. lemme finish this quick.

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by Meowster

eek at my boyfriend waking up and asking why I'm not in bed on our anniversary. lemme finish this quick.

Write some thorough last critiques and go get that lifeblood.

[Skywalker]

Originally posted by Moonchild

Write some thorough last critiques and go get that lifeblood.

Funny becuz I'm on urs right now.

[Aurora]

wow I'm flopping, I'm the last one to write my comments.

I'll post Meowster's some time after maintenance!

[Hugamari]

Radar is a timeless classic that deserved to be on at least 3 of Britney's albums.

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by Sam 

I'll post Meowster's some time after maintenance!

[ceremonials]

It's after maintenance bitch

[Moonchild]

Dd, I apologize for our lack of patience, Samantha.

[Dylobs]

After Maintenance.

[ceremonials]

Nvm I'm out. I'll see them in the morning!

[Aurora]

Finished comments for Batch 1 (just comments, so no hints, sorry!), I'll post Meowster's comments now.