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Originally posted by Moonchild
I really believed in my entry; I poured my heart and soul into it. I'm glad I'm safe, but I thought it would do better. I'm grateful I'm not in the bottom, but I'm disappointed.
Can someone elaborate on what I could have done better so I know for future challenges?
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I had you at #4 so its not like there was much room for improvement.
However, you were very wordy. I understand wanting to be thorough but as a judge, going through all that, no matter how good or bad, isn't fun. If you can't get your point across in a concise manner, you're thinking way too much.
Also like I said in my critique, choosing Hair hurt you. Not that I dislike Gaga, but when 3 out of 11 of you pick a song by her, it shows a lack of originality/creativity on your part.